What do you think about this? It's my creation, but i also find it hard to under
April 11, 2007 5:54pm CST
You see what you think, they see what you do! If you want to see what they see, And the others see what you see, Do what you think and think what you do! Hard to understand, isn't it! my English is not great! Anyway please tell what you tihnk and be free to propose a better version, let's call this version 1.0!
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14 Apr 07
Actually, I understood it perfectly...but as it stands, it's a terrible piece of writing. I understand the whole concept of perception and how others see your actions but you see your reasons behind your actions. If you want to see yourself as others see you, then you should look at your own actions in the abstract. That is actually very enlightening and I like it. But you should write more, add to it. Go about it a different way even. Maybe you should have written it in your own language. You can then have someone who is knowledgeable about such things translate it properly. But as a piece of literature, I'm sorry to say it's terrible. As a lesson and a sentiment and a...feeling, I think it's wonderful. Ra http://www.myspace.com/rapoetic http://rapoetics.blogspot.com/
14 Apr 07
I never wanted that to be literature,No! LoL! I just wrote that because it hit me, just like that! But thanks you consider it literature, i don't! Even if you consider it terrible, lol it is, but you consider it literature, so thats something, isn't it? Thanks man ! I will even check the blogs!