I wrote this song last year for my girlfriend
By Pirate_Arg
@Pirate_Arg (472)
South Africa
May 12, 2008 3:39pm CST
This link leads to an MP3 download of a song I wrote all by myself late last year as a christmas present for my girlfriend.
http://www.box.net/shared/7yh9x198g4
I'm just wondering what everyone thinks. Any criticism and suggestions are also welcome since I will probably write another one at some point.
Thanks in advance
4 responses
@tryxiness (4544)
• Philippines
13 May 08
Is it all instrumental? Just piano right? It is soothing though. :) The music is fine. Although, I am a music and lyrics person, I hope I can have a copy of the lyrics.
You are way too sweet to write something for someone so special.
@Pirate_Arg (472)
• South Africa
13 May 08
There are lyrics, I'm just a bit too shy to stick them on the internet. I am by no stretch of the imagination a poet. The piano you hear is actually just a fancy midi patch since I don't have any great recording equipment. I think it came out quite nicely though. But when it comes down to it, the point is that she liked it so I declare it a success.
@angel_kaycee (1112)
• Philippines
14 May 08
wow! it was so romantic. it is so soothing. i wish my boyfriend could also write me a song. although he's a pianist too he haven't written any for me. i used to write one for him before but i haven't got the guts to tell him that i did. i was afraid he wouldn't like it either. i think your song would be better with lyrics. why not let us hear the lyrics too. i was thinking what your girlfriend would feel and say if she hears it. good luck.
@Pirate_Arg (472)
• South Africa
14 May 08
Thanks. I think you should give him the song if you wrote it for him. Even if it doesn't quite meet up with his musical taste, he will probably be touched by the fact that you took the time to write it for him. When it comes down to it, isn't that the point anyway, just to make the other person feel special?
@10fingaz2getha4eva (287)
• United States
13 May 08
i liked it wish there were lyrics but still great plus the name is cool..:)
@Pirate_Arg (472)
• South Africa
13 May 08
The name is as it is because (you may have read on one of the other threads if you are stalking me) one of my pet names for her is Nicotine. There are lyrics, I've just kept them to myself since I am shy and I'm bad at writing lyrics.
