prisoner...

Philippines
August 8, 2008 10:00am CST
prisoner -by petiksmode 8-07-08 i dont know where this leads me i am falling deeper and deeper Digging my heart down in the ground hoping that a rope will come down my heart aches as my mind raises pain is striking as my body is willing i am inlove, yes i am Not knowing if you feel the same i hear voices calling, telling me wanting me out of this den i am a prisoner of you hoping that wyou will freed me too if i say i quit will you gain victory what i will stay will that means agony? -i have written this poem yesterday this is what i am feeling, the irony is i am a "happy prisoner" what do you think of this thnx.
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@riyasam (16556)
• India
8 Aug 08
it is a beautiful poem.your lover is really lucky.have a good day and happy mylotting..
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• Philippines
8 Aug 08
oh thnks for appreciating it...i hope he feels the same way that he is lucky...
@riyasam (16556)
• India
21 Aug 08
thanks for b.r.
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@sunkissed (4330)
• United States
21 Aug 08
This is a very good poem, it shows how very much you are in love with a special person. You really do have special talent as a poet..
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• Philippines
21 Aug 08
thnks sunkissed fro he appreciation i am really gald that you enjoy readingmy poem.. have great day
@valeria1 (2721)
• United States
21 Aug 08
OMG! Petik you are always surprising me! This is fantastic, do you have another poems? You should get it going and publish somehow, you have the talent great friend!
• Philippines
21 Aug 08
ywha i have lots of other poems..it is actually my hobby to write poems...thnks for appreciating it... love you always valeria