are you a victim or not....

Philippines
September 15, 2008 12:39pm CST
-victims- by petiks @ 11:30 pm things had happened none of us dares to plan most if not all got hurt surely no one is glad reasons might unknown lessons will unvail apologies were given acceptance hopefuly can be taken wounds reopen hearts been bruised minds are raising as the emotions flowing tears been shed hugs been given kisses been blown love been taken -my present being...
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prudhvi27
@prudhvi27 (414)
• India
15 Sep 08
Fabulous job dude u started the poem very nicely in the middle u went fast, jus slow down ur emotion and write it elobarately that should touch our Heart.I hope u expressed ur emotion in ur peom, next time u plan to Motivate others mind. Peom should be inspiring and should come close to others Heart. Any way u did a fabulous job - the main theme undercurently u said that we are all Victims. I loved it so much Please keep in touch. You are always welcome to coment on my Discussions i create................................................
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petiksmode
@petiksmode (2983)
• Philippines
15 Sep 08
thnks for appreciating it that means a lot to me....that was composed becoz i currently feel that way..i just had my heart pumped and let my fingers reveal what it beats and there the poem came from.. thnks a alot again dude...