My short story which I would like you to read and react to.
By Jenaisle
@Jenaisle (16568)
Philippines
January 4, 2009 4:03am CST
Writing is a noble profession if you're able to inspire people and let them learn something new from your story. I believe that stories should be shared. I have written a short story in my writing blog and I am somewhat hesitant to let you read it guys. But I know Mylotters are supportive people and helpful people so I am taking the courageous stand and posting it here. Thanks for reading it and reacting. I would appreciate it a lot.
http://gewgawwritings.blogspot.com/2008/12/i-hope-youll-have-happy-new-year-too.html
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7 responses
@fatherblogger (673)
• Philippines
4 Jan 09
The story is not just a story, it's a reality. I must admit, I don't enjoy reading stories these days due to my new money making project. But then, I can say that it is highly recommended. Definitely, a good lesson to learn.
Congrats, Jena!
@fatherblogger (673)
• Philippines
4 Jan 09
Actually, I am super busy. By the way, thanks for leaving a comment on my latest project. If you'll notice, it's NOT the usual blog you see everyday.
Thanks really for story, as it's nice to be diverted once in a while.
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@nilzerous1 (2434)
• India
11 Feb 09
Your stories reflect a creative essence, very detailed and poetic in its expression. Enjoyed reading chapter: 16. I hope this will be published in the form of a book in near future!
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@sutanhartanto (4122)
• Indonesia
6 Jan 09
Hi Jen,
That's a wonderful yet realistic story. You write like a skilled professional author do 
(or you are one of them already?) You seems to have no problem in writing. The kids like in you story do exists in every corner in this beloved earth. Well...
I wish I can write like you do. In the past I also used to write short stories and sent it to teenlit magazines. And they published some of them 
. But that's in my native language. I wish I can write in English well like you. Thanks for inspiring.
(or you are one of them already?) You seems to have no problem in writing. The kids like in you story do exists in every corner in this beloved earth. Well...
I wish I can write like you do. In the past I also used to write short stories and sent it to teenlit magazines. And they published some of them . But that's in my native language. I wish I can write in English well like you. Thanks for inspiring. @Jenaisle (16568)
• Philippines
6 Jan 09
Wow, it's good to know that you write too, I understand that you're from India? You should keep writing these stories to inspire other people. I did write short stories for local magazines here when I was youngr, now I just blog. BUt I'm writing a novel..lol...Cheers and thanks for commenting and reading my story. I appreciate it a lot. 
@paid2write (5201)
•
4 Jan 09
You have no need to be hesitant in asking others to read your story. It's an interesting story, well written.
I hope you will gain courage from the response and keep on writing and promoting your stories.
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@roysville (496)
• Philippines
4 Jan 09
Great story Jena! Depicting so much the truth in our society today.
You are indeed a great writer!
Congratulations!
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@sunshinelady (7609)
• United States
4 Jan 09
I just read your story and it is very good. The sad thing about it is that it is all too true. Kids are having to scrounge on the streets for something to eat. Your story kept my interest and was done very well.
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