My short story which I would like you to read and react to.  |
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 Writing is a noble profession if you're able to inspire people and let them learn something new from your story. I believe that stories should be shared. I have written a short story in my writing blog and I am somewhat hesitant to let you read it guys. But I know Mylotters are supportive people and helpful people so I am taking the courageous stand and posting it here. Thanks for reading it and reacting. I would appreciate it a lot.
http://gewgawwritings.blogspot.com/2008/12/i-hope-youll-have-happy-new-year-too.html
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1.  fatherblogger (485) | 1 year ago |  The story is not just a story, it's a reality. I must admit, I don't enjoy reading stories these days due to my new money making project. But then, I can say that it is highly recommended. Definitely, a good lesson to learn.
Congrats, Jena!
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| fatherblogger (485) | 1 year ago | Actually, I am super busy. By the way, thanks for leaving a comment on my latest project. If you'll notice, it's NOT the usual blog you see everyday.
Thanks really for story, as it's nice to be diverted once in a while. | |
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2.  roysville (266) | 1 year ago |  Great story Jena! Depicting so much the truth in our society today.
You are indeed a great writer!
Congratulations!
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| 3. paid2write (4134) | 1 year ago |  You have no need to be hesitant in asking others to read your story. It's an interesting story, well written.
I hope you will gain courage from the response and keep on writing and promoting your stories.
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4.  jakill (313) | 1 year ago |  Hi Jena. As you know I've already responded positively to the story on your blog. But what a good idea to ask for responses here. You shouldn't feel bashful about it. It's well worth a read, and you might get some helpful suggestions from other writers.
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| 5. sunshinelady (6113) | 1 year ago |  I just read your story and it is very good. The sad thing about it is that it is all too true. Kids are having to scrounge on the streets for something to eat. Your story kept my interest and was done very well.
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| 6. bianroxas (1334) | 1 year ago |  Wow! You are a good writer. Your story is good. You know what, I read only books of best sellers like Anne Rice, JR Tolkien, Mitch Albom, Nicholas Sparks, and Amy Tan. Their stories are excellent but you can one of them if you enhance it more and introduce your writings on the net. I sent you a link through personal message where you can post your writings.
Have a nice day!
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| 8. nilzerous1 (1743) | 12 months ago |  Your stories reflect a creative essence, very detailed and poetic in its expression. Enjoyed reading chapter: 16. I hope this will be published in the form of a book in near future!
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