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Elements of a Woman
She is like the night
cool and mysterious
She is like the day
warm and majestic
She is like the wind
conservative, yet unpredictable
She is like the water
open, yet holding many secrets
She is like the Earth
maternal, yet allowing freedom to grow
She is like the sun
burning with desires that aren't easy quenched
She is like the moon
beautiful and graceful
She is like the universe
holding my very soul in her arms.
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1.  PoetryPose (1155)
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3 years ago
| |  I write poetry my self and enjoy reading other poets works and thoughts...Very good poem...I enjoyed the lines and the flowing lines....
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 additional001 (115)
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3 years ago
| | Thanks... not sure which lines you liked as none of them were quoted LOL. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment though. It's greatly appreciated! | | | |
| PoetryPose (1155)
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3 years ago
| | She is like the universe
Holding my soul in her very arms.... | | | |
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| 2. ranikrishnan (639)
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3 years ago
| | wow.. man i can definately say you are so very deeply in love with someone am i right? well women are great as long as men treat them as great... dont you think so..
"She is like the water open, yet holding many secrets
She is like the Earth maternal, yet allowing freedom to grow
She is like the sun burning with desires that aren't easy quenched
She is like the moon beautiful and graceful
She is like the universe holding my very soul in her arms. "
i like these lines very much .. | | | | | | |
| additional001 (115)
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3 years ago
| | Well the poem wasn't so much about being in love with a woman... more in love with all women and how they tend to relate to elemental things around us. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Much appreciated. | | | |
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| additional001 (115)
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3 years ago
| | Thank you for your feedback :) I agree with those sentiments somewhat. :) | | | |
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| 4. kalaga (499)
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3 years ago
| |  WONDERFUL...u made all the women feel ...well beautiful.wow...really nice.yes she is like the earth and all the u mentioned in that poem.thank u so much for sharing ur thoughts with us.it is lovely.hats off for ur wonderful art.
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| additional001 (115)
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3 years ago
| | Poetry like any art is only art when it's shared and enjoyed by many. I'm glad that you like my work as much as you do, it makes sharing worth while when people share their feedback on it. It's nice to know that it effects people in some way. | | | |
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