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myLot reputation of 75/100. binacheri14 (168)   ranked 496 out of 6,380 in writing4 weeks ago

I have a vision of this girl I have seen,
sitting down by the pond waring black wings.
I can't tell if she is sad,
or what feelings she has.
Is she lost or alone,
what has her reflction shown?
Should I go and stand by her side,
or will she run away and hide?
Wait, no she wont, she can't,
it's me that I see.
She is my dark angle,
her reflection is me.

 
 
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1. myLot reputation of 62/100. ongtina (103)   4 weeks ago

Not too bad but check on spelling.

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