Paradise Regained
By Ram Bansal
@rambansal (574)
India
August 13, 2011 9:29pm CST
I have been weeping,
I have been crying,
I have been requesting,
You did not listen,
Went away weeping, complaining,
Promising never to return.
I sank, sank deep to deeper...
You dd not feel, did not bother....
But so many arms spread to pull me up, to lap me up...
I was to jump into some, to find the warmth of embrace,
You came calling 'sorry, my love, I miss you'
Once again, you filled my void, prevented me from drifting,
Yes, darling, a 'sorry' is never late,provided it is real.
How selfish you are -
You did not bother for my love, for my tears, for my cries, for my requests...
You bothered just for your missing me.
I appreciate your love, your 'sorry', your coming back..
But I can not forget all those who breathed hopes in me,
Who extended their helping hands to me,
Who assured me of their warm embraces to me,
In my dark days of being away from you.
You are my life, they make my environment.
Promise, you won't be jealous of them all.
5 responses
@umabharti (3972)
• India
14 Aug 11
That is nice,it looks like a poetry .It sounds and has good feeling in it.very nice to read all that.
@rambansal (574)
• India
15 Aug 11
Yes, my dear Uma, my existence is composed of 80 percent emotions and only 20 apparent physique. One has to go very deep to understand me. And I value it.
@umabharti (3972)
• India
15 Aug 11
hi, i think it should be fifty fifty so that is balanced or you should see a person who can have 80 percent practical(physical) and 20 percent emotional to make life beautiful.Because anything exceeding the limits wil not be an enjoying thing.
@jaiho2009 (39140)
• Philippines
14 Aug 11
hello ram,
Now you really become a poet.
Nice words and expression of feelings.
have a good day always
jaiho®
Nice words and expression of feelings.
have a good day always
jaiho®@rambansal (574)
• India
15 Aug 11
Yes my baby, you made me like that whatever I am. Your contribution to my life will always be valued.
@vandana7 (102698)
• India
14 Aug 11
Your feelings are expressed very beautifully in this. Hope it is original. :)
Now coming to practicalities - dump the girl. I mean it. Sorry to tell you but patchups do not work ..especially in love.
The word sorry is good - it makes you forgive. But you realized her selfishness. Which means you are out of the realm of love. Dont force yourself to get into it or remain into it - just because of the past. It would spoil your future.
@rambansal (574)
• India
14 Aug 11
My dear Vandana, I appreciate your concern for my well-being, and I am indebted to you. But my dear, I beg to differ with you a little bit on this. I explain here, for you, a very special friend, highly concerned for me.
My dear, life and its games are not straight lines, and no straight jacket formula is applicable under all circumstances. If there is no uniqueness in a situation, we can apply a routine solution.
But we two have great uniqueness and call them to be highly abnormalities, nobody else can imagine. So our problem is highly and sharply unique. Every unique problem needs an equally unique solution. I understand it so well, as I understand your concern for me. I hope you will grant me freedom to be on my path in this unique situation of mine.
Your concern for me is highly appreciated once again. Thanks.
@bluegemini10 (327)
• United States
14 Aug 11
If i'm not mistaken this is a poem to express your feeling right, I really love poems and this one was really good if it was a poem, and if it's not turn it into a poem
