Is it a grammar mistake or not ??/

Shijiazhuang, China
October 27, 2011 1:03am CST
Every time when I send an email to my customer, I will always end up with the sentence of you are really welcomed to visit our company. but today my collegue (she used to be my english teacher during middle school)pointed that sentence is not right.but I think it's a passive voice in grammar.what do you think ?? right or wrong???
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telmesh
@telmesh (1793)
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27 Oct 11
Hi friend Lightrain. I will give you a couple of alternatives. I am guessing this was not a personal call to business premisses. In finishing off your email don't use the word welcome instead use the following : Thank you for visiting our company, please call again. If you want to invite some one to visit your business premisses in person, please say : You are very welcome to visit our company. Hoping this helps sorry to disappoint a very grand effort.
Will Zhang
@lightrain (167)
• Shijiazhuang, China
28 Oct 11
Thank you ,dear Telmesh.that's very kind of you to correct my mistake.Hope everything is going well with your family and business.
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telmesh
@telmesh (1793)
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28 Oct 11
Hi lightrain glad to be of help and thanks everything is well with us and I hope all is well with you also. Can you say why your contribution level as dropped. I thought you had been here sometime.
bembzee
@bembzee (768)
• Philippines
27 Oct 11
I think it's wrong. Is the idea of your sentence is to tell your client that they are welcome to visit your company again?If yes, you should not write the word welcome in past tense.
Will Zhang
@lightrain (167)
• Shijiazhuang, China
27 Oct 11
thank you ,my friend,but if welcome is a vt, is this sentense right ???