Poetry - "Amazing Grace"
By Ambur25
@Ambur25 (1006)
United States
December 4, 2006 8:45am CST
Hello, my name is Gracie
I am 6 1/2 years old
I may be small with tiny hands
But that 1/2 year is important, you know
You see, I am a special little girl
I can do a really neat thing
My mommy and daddy thought it was neat
But baby brother was too young to see
I do this neat thing all the time
Even when I forget to
'Cause sometimes I don't think to do it
But, it's really neat when I do
You would think it was neat as me
I saw it on a cartoon
I tried it out later that day
When Mommy came home that afternoon
I will tell you about my special trick
If you promise not to tell
Keep my secret and I'll show you how
I know you'll do it well
My secret is, I can be invisible
Even when I try not to be
I just close my eyes and count to 10
When I'm done, they can't see
Don't forget, you promised not to tell
It can be a secret between me and you
The only problem is, I made Mommy mad
I told her my secret, she said it wasn't true
She was sitting at the table
Staring at papers laying there
I walked up beside her
And touched her pretty hair
I guess I closed my eyes that time
Just a little too tight
I don't think she saw me there
But something wasn't right
Mommy is scared of flies, I think
One must have been right there
She waved her arm and screamed "Get out of here!"
Never breaking her stare
I know she didn't see me
'Cause I did my special trick
I wanted to touch her again
But this time I'll do it quick
Quietly I reached up and touched her
Mommy waved her arm again
It must have been that fly
But this is where it begins
You see, that same silly fly
Must have been very close
'Cause when Mommy waved her arm
She hit me, and then she froze
I know she didn't see me
'Cause I was doing my special thing
I got up off of the floor
And quietly started to sing
I didn't mean to get in the way
I'm sure she didn't mean it
I tried to do the things I should do
Though I'm sure she doesn't see it
I'm sure my mommy's scared
When she thinks that I'm not there
So I need to find a way to show her
And let her know I care
Mommy left for work that night
It was late and very dark
I had to find her and make her see
I planned exactly where to start
I know I'm not supposed to cross the street
But this time I think I must
I told my Teddy everything
'Cause he's the one I trust
We're going to go find Mommy, I said
And surprise her very good
I know she'll be happy to see me tonight
I just knew for sure she would
Quietly crossing the street
With Teddy still in hand
I just got so excited
So holding Teddy tight, I ran
Then is when I realized something
It's not so good to be unseen
'Cause just as I crossed the road that night
I heard my Teddy scream
I don't remember too much after that
But, I know my mommy was there
She was on her knees and crying
So again I touched her hair
Still she didn't see me
Or feel my little hand
I pulled her by the arm
Trying to make her stand
She told me she was sorry
For all the wrong she'd done
I don't understand what she meant
When she said that I was gone
So I think that night I did
Close my eyes too tight
So if you see my mommy
Tell her I'm alright
Tell her that I'm sorry
For doing my special thing
And if she closes her eyes at night
She can still hear me sing
Mommy still doesn't see me
But she says she knows I'm there
And when she's asleep at night
I still touch her pretty hair
Good night, my name is Gracie
I am 6 1/2 years old
You may not see me, but know I'm there
I am an angel now, you know.
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