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Would love feedback on this first chapter of my novel....

tinamwhite @tinamwhite (3252) • United States 5 Aug 07

Chapter 1 He awoke slowly, uncertain of his surroundings. The dingy white ceiling had several dark spots, no doubt from previous leaks. The wallpaper was a pattern that he was certain had not been manufactured in at least...

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