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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 18 Dec 18

Left my mama on that day. Tears in her eyes, no words to say. Signed my name on the dotted line. Sorry mama this life is mine. Mama, mama it’s okay. I’m gonna be home on Christmas Day. Saddest day of my life. I kissed my son, I...

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DEBJANI BASAK Why always sad ones? Its heart touching. But are you really upset with your life? Write something which makes us smile.

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

Every time I see you cry my soul sheds a tear. I feel your pain like I was the one stabbed in the heart with a spear. Gorgeous on the outside, but on the inside, you're scarred to Hell. Trust me things are gonna get better even...

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Lena Kovadlo @JordnP123 Ever thought of doing a book?

18 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 18 Dec 18

Left my mama on that day. Tears in her eyes, no words to say. Signed my name on the dotted line. Sorry mama this life is mine. Mama, mama it’s okay. I’m gonna be home on Christmas Day. Saddest day of my life. I kissed my son, I...

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Diana This is sad.

18 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

I thought I was a giant in this world but I realized I’m much more. When I feel this trigger squeeze, I hear the blast in the heart of a lion’s roar. The power in this fingertip, I feel the rush in my core. Take other lives until...

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Alvin Jenn @JordnP123 Do anything? How many years to finish your duty or you plan to work as full time?

17 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

Every time I see you cry my soul sheds a tear. I feel your pain like I was the one stabbed in the heart with a spear. Gorgeous on the outside, but on the inside, you're scarred to Hell. Trust me things are gonna get better even...

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Lena Kovadlo @JordnP123 Do you write a lot of poems?

17 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

Every time I see you cry my soul sheds a tear. I feel your pain like I was the one stabbed in the heart with a spear. Gorgeous on the outside, but on the inside, you're scarred to Hell. Trust me things are gonna get better even...

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Lena Kovadlo Very powerful and moving poem!

17 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

I thought I was a giant in this world but I realized I’m much more. When I feel this trigger squeeze, I hear the blast in the heart of a lion’s roar. The power in this fingertip, I feel the rush in my core. Take other lives until...

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Alvin Jenn That's is an interesting story to hear that. May I know are you the real soldier in the US? Are you still serving the country overseas? Hope you will be fine everyday. It's scary to hear about death, bullet and violet over there.

17 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I grew up in a deep gutter. Warm-hearted boy with an intense stutter. Put everyone's feelings above my own. Didn't pursue my own desires, that's why I'm so alone. Never get to show what my heart exposes. I hope I find love...

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Brenna "Sometimes read each other wrong, but always on the same pages." i really, REALLY love that line. you're quite the writer!

17 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I use poetry to express how I’m feeling in my heart and to make people’s days when they read them and a smile appears on their faces Does anyone wanna take some time out of their day and read some? I can answer any questions that...

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Brenna sure, i like reading poetry, though I'm terrible at writing it

17 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Abi That's a great story and sure, love is always found no matter how many people walk away from our lives.

15 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

As the rain falls from the sky I begin to look at the tears shed from my heart. I begin to stop listening to the fear and go for what I've wanted from the start. That beautiful soul with the smile that warms the coldest heart....

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Abi That's a great poem.

15 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I use poetry to express how I’m feeling in my heart and to make people’s days when they read them and a smile appears on their faces Does anyone wanna take some time out of their day and read some? I can answer any questions that...

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Mugure Karen Wanjiru I would like to read some.

15 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Hope @JordnP123 Great! I hope I spot it when you do.

14 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Lena Kovadlo @JordnP123 You're welcome! It's nice to meet another poet on here.

14 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Lena Kovadlo (5/20/18) - is this supposed to be the title of the poem? Good poem! Emotional. Tells a story. And the rhymes work well.

14 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Hope Good for her. Is this a true story or just a nice poem? Will she now live alone for the rest of her life?

14 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I grew up in a deep gutter. Warm-hearted boy with an intense stutter. Put everyone's feelings above my own. Didn't pursue my own desires, that's why I'm so alone. Never get to show what my heart exposes. I hope I find love...

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Icydoll Nice one

14 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I grew up in a deep gutter. Warm-hearted boy with an intense stutter. Put everyone's feelings above my own. Didn't pursue my own desires, that's why I'm so alone. Never get to show what my heart exposes. I hope I find love...

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Alfredo Rossi she is out there.Just have to find it where or when.Good luck my man

14 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I use poetry to express how I’m feeling in my heart and to make people’s days when they read them and a smile appears on their faces Does anyone wanna take some time out of their day and read some? I can answer any questions that...

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Alfredo Rossi this should be lovely to see this.I like to see it.We have many here loved this.Give it a shot.

14 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I use poetry to express how I’m feeling in my heart and to make people’s days when they read them and a smile appears on their faces Does anyone wanna take some time out of their day and read some? I can answer any questions that...

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Icydoll I'm looking forward to read your poetry

14 Dec 18

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