LearningToBreathe

@LearningToBreathe (11)

India • Age 36

Joined myLot 19 years ago

Its all in the head

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Do you think poetry is supposed to rhyme?

Amy @artemis432 (7474) • Abernathy, Texas 23 Aug 07

The majority of poetry is free verse. For me, rhyming poetry comes out stilted and trite. Its obvious that instead of allowing the words to flow freely, I imprison my words in strict form and so the creativity seems to get caught...

marie ranier rilke

traditional poetry

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LearningToBreathe I am into both poetry and song writing.It has been a matter of controversy for some throughout a long time about how poetry should be rhythmic or not.Some poets found more freedom to their pens in writing styles with open verses, yet some were still...

28 Aug 07

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The Real Me!!!

Rozie37 @Rozie37 (15499) • Turkmenistan 27 Aug 07

Okay, this is going to take a lot of courage. I am by my doctor's diagnosis obese. I have been severely over weight for many years. It is something that I rarely ever discuss. Not so much because I am ashamed of it or afraid that...

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LearningToBreathe Thank you rozie for sharing your experience.Its good that you did it.You know that your realization is the first step towards your fix.Its a pity that your physical problems restrict you.Determine yourself and make yourself so strong that you are able to pass...

28 Aug 07

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if you will forgive her while she hurt you?

zdh987562 @zdh987562 (263) • China 19 Aug 07

last year,she called me ,hurt me ,let me feel so sad that the world abandoned me. today,she asked to be forgived. what can i do? i have to forgive?

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LearningToBreathe Its completely upto you what you decide.What kind of a relationship you have,had or will be having play a certain role in that decision.If she's important in your life then think hard over it, otherwise don't steam yourself up.A lot depends on the...

21 Aug 07

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I Have a Dream Of Being a Writer ... But

KrauseHome @KrauseHome (36445) • United States 19 Aug 07

have this Big fear of rejection. I know there are many sites online where a person can submit like Associated Content, Gather, Helium, etc. just to name a few besides here and make some extra money online, but that is only a small...

fear of rejection

freelance writer

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LearningToBreathe Hi KrauseHome, i wanted to add that there's really no reason for you to be feeling down.If your writings are being rejected at a particular place,then its probably not the right time or place for you to go to.You can surely try elsewhere because you know,"One...

19 Aug 07

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