The Power of a Storm
By ilove2shop
@ilove2shop (58)
United States
March 28, 2008 1:06pm CST
This is a poem I wrote of thunderstorms.
In the midst of the storm
thunder clouds form.
Such power of sound
as thunder shakes the ground.
There are those
who love the storms woes.
watching with delight
at the lightening strikes.
Along comes the rain
the way it pours
the way it flows.
The sound can be soothing
to the thunder in our souls.
written by Elizabeth Damons
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@idowrite72 (2213)
• United States
4 Apr 08
Nice poem! I also love thunderstorms and the more lightning and thunder the better.
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@cowgirl03051979 (918)
• United States
18 Oct 11
i love it i think it is a perfect description of a thunder storm i think the first two verses are amazing i am a big fan of rhyming poetry but the third verse i think could use a little work i like the words that you uses like pours, flows, and souls but i think since the rest of the poem rhymed i think the third verse should too but that is just my personal opinion like i said i thought the poem was amazing you should enter it into a contest
