prisoner...
By petiksmode
@petiksmode (2983)
Philippines
August 8, 2008 10:00am CST
prisoner
-by petiksmode 8-07-08
i dont know where this leads me
i am falling deeper and deeper
Digging my heart down in the ground
hoping that a rope will come down
my heart aches as my mind raises
pain is striking as my body is willing
i am inlove, yes i am
Not knowing if you feel the same
i hear voices calling, telling me
wanting me out of this den
i am a prisoner of you
hoping that wyou will freed me too
if i say i quit
will you gain victory
what i will stay
will that means agony?
-i have written this poem yesterday this is what i am feeling, the irony is i am a "happy prisoner"
what do you think of this thnx.
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3 responses
@petiksmode (2983)
• Philippines
8 Aug 08
oh thnks for appreciating it...i hope he feels the same way that he is lucky...
@sunkissed (4330)
• United States
21 Aug 08
This is a very good poem, it shows how very much you are in love with a special person. You really do have special talent as a poet..
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@petiksmode (2983)
• Philippines
21 Aug 08
thnks sunkissed fro he appreciation i am really gald that you enjoy readingmy poem..
have great day
@petiksmode (2983)
• Philippines
21 Aug 08
ywha i have lots of other poems..it is actually my hobby to write poems...thnks for appreciating it...
love you always valeria




