Pls read my poem adn let me know wot u think! thanks xx

July 23, 2009 9:02pm CST
Self Love: when life becomes too much to hold onto sit down and think of those who love you of those who have needed you many times before and what they would feel, if you were no more when life becomes too much to bear think of those who really do care when you have brought joy when the darkness is near and shined effortlessly through thier fear you're presence in life is worth more than you know our hearts posses an indescribable glow that precedes our presence as we struggle on through like an aura of love, it attracts them to you you are needed much more here on thhis earth you need to accept your inner self worth so tell yourself this when you havebt a clue to carry on in this life you must love yourself too. all responses appreciated thanku!! xx
3 responses
@CMTS_87 (1340)
• Philippines
24 Jul 09
I must say your poem is nice! Very helpful if you want to lift your spirits! Happy MyLotting!
@CMTS_87 (1340)
• Philippines
28 Jul 09
Thanks for commending my post my friend! Happy MyLotting!
@defcon505 (921)
• United States
24 Jul 09
Fantastic! Nice poem. It this based on your own personal experience.
24 Jul 09
yes, i use my own experiences as inspiration and pretty much anything that pops in my head in the mean time!!! thak u xx
@pjsr18 (340)
• Philippines
24 Jul 09
Nice poem! The message is great! In can relate to it. You are correct, when you're down and sad, we should think about the person who's there for us because they can take all the pain that we are feeling! And indeed, We should also love ourself!