"He Had Had," (He What WHAT?" LOL!)
By Maggiepie
@Maggiepie (7816)
United States
March 22, 2011 2:36am CST
Okay, I'll admit, this is just a private quirk of mine, but the phrase "So-&-So had had (something or other)..." bugs the water out of me! It just stops my eye (& my mental "ear") cold when reading or hearing a story, & I'm too distracted to stay lost in the story.
Technically, there's nothing grammatically improper about it, yet it seems aurally awkward. I find myself automatically substituting things for the second "had" just to make it more aesthetically pleasing to me.
Here are a few samples of what I mean, & I'll bold the second "had" substitution to make it easier to "listen" & hear how much easier on the ear it is:
"Joan had gone through as much nonsense as she could stand."
"When he was younger, Arther had possessed far more land than he does now."
"Lindsey had experienced the time of her life in Italy!"
"Bill knew he had drunk waaaay too much coffee."
Now do you see what I mean? It takes a trifle extra effort, but I think it's worth it, for the sake of the art which language is!
I wonder, do any of you mentally rearrange things people say just to make your aesthetic sense happier?
Maggiepie
"Obstacles are those frightening things you see when you take you eyes off your goal." ~ Henry James
I wonder, do any of you mentally rearrange things people say just to make your aesthetic sense happier?
Maggiepie
"Obstacles are those frightening things you see when you take you eyes off your goal." ~ Henry James5 people like this
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@owlwings (43897)
• Cambridge, England
22 Mar 11
You are right to avoid duplication of words like 'had' and 'that' and it is much better to find alternatives to overused words like 'got', 'gotten' and so on.
Many English grammatical forms are correct but ugly when spoken and I find that it is always a good plan when writing to read the passage out loud, preferably to an audience. If the passage is difficult to say, ugly, intrusive or lacks real meaning, then it needs re-writing!
There are many classic examples of over-duplication, for example: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/James_while_John_had_had_had_had_had_had_had_had_had_had_had_a_better_effect_on_the_teacher Even a competent native English speaker would have trouble emphasising (or punctuating) that sentence so that it makes sense!
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@Maggiepie (7816)
• United States
24 Mar 11
Wow, Owlwings! Thanks for those links! I've bookmarked those for future reference. They're very clear, & in certain cases, very funny! If I return to teaching ESL, I can use them.
Maggiepie
"In art, economy is always beauty." ~ Henry James

@yoyo1198 (3641)
• United States
22 Mar 11
Yep, I do it all the time. I understand fully what you are saying. I don't do the 'rearranging' for the ear but usually for the written page. I do not like repetition and will substitute words in a sentence/paragraph in order not to say it over and over again. I dislike using the used to in order to mean once did or have done. Looking at the used to, what does that mean when looking at it standing alone? English is such a complex language that I don't understand how anyone learns it as a second language and I admire them for their efforts. Interesting topic, Maggiepie.3 people like this
@Maggiepie (7816)
• United States
24 Mar 11
YOYO: I do it for reading as well as for spoken language. If I don't, I find it difficult to return to the story! That's just my quirky hangup, I realize. It's probably a sign of some sort of obsessive-compulsive behavior.
I hadn't considered "used to" as bad, but I do like your take on it. I may change that, as well, if it starts to nag me as "had had" does!
Maggiepie
"In art, economy is always beauty." ~ Henry James
I hadn't considered "used to" as bad, but I do like your take on it. I may change that, as well, if it starts to nag me as "had had" does!
Maggiepie
"In art, economy is always beauty." ~ Henry James@Maggiepie (7816)
• United States
24 Mar 11
STINE: Bitte! I took German (Old High German, at that) in high school, & I must disagree! English is a stew of other languages, along with some original English, with each language having its own peculiar grammatical rules of word use, & all of them cobbled together higgledy-piggledy, so that spelling & grammar are incomprehensibly arbitrary! One must memorize every "exception" to the gigglegiggle "rules" in order to speak it even moderately well! I've taught ESL, & have often wondered how those whose native language doesn't stem from a Latin base--even partially!--ever manage to learn my tongue! Heck, the only reason I learned it, I'm sure, is because I did so before I found out how hard it is to learn!
German seems far more consistent & reasonable to me! Yes, it does have words that are a pastiche of other words, which results in some very long & rambling terms, but at least those words all have the same base, & types of spelling!
I liked learning German. My teacher was from Germany, & she told me I had the accent down perfectly.
Sidebar: This will date me, but one of our German club's class assignments was to attend a church that did their entire service in Old High German. This was in Houston in the early 60s. Try even suggesting such a non-PC thing now!
Maggiepie
"In art, economy is always beauty." ~ Henry James
German seems far more consistent & reasonable to me! Yes, it does have words that are a pastiche of other words, which results in some very long & rambling terms, but at least those words all have the same base, & types of spelling!
I liked learning German. My teacher was from Germany, & she told me I had the accent down perfectly.
Sidebar: This will date me, but one of our German club's class assignments was to attend a church that did their entire service in Old High German. This was in Houston in the early 60s. Try even suggesting such a non-PC thing now!
Maggiepie
"In art, economy is always beauty." ~ Henry James@Maggiepie (7816)
• United States
24 Mar 11
LOL! So I'm to blame, eh? Or is that, "I get the credit"?
Go look at Owlwings' links. I think you'll get quite a kick out of them!
Maggiepie
"In art, economy is always beauty." ~ Henry James
Maggiepie
"In art, economy is always beauty." ~ Henry James @cream97 (29085)
• United States
5 Apr 11
Hi. Maggiepie. Yes, I have seen these type of sentences combined together with the wrong word. I usually will just read right through it until I can understand it with the word that I would rather use. And then again, when I am posting, I try to make sure that I use my words correctly so that others can know where I am coming from when it concerns the present and the past tense.

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@Maggiepie (7816)
• United States
6 Apr 11
Then congratulations on doing the same as I do! Brilliant minds think alike, eh?
Maggiepie
"It is with words as with sunbeams, the more they are condensed, the deeper they burn." ~ Robert Southey, poet (1774-1843)
Maggiepie
"It is with words as with sunbeams, the more they are condensed, the deeper they burn." ~ Robert Southey, poet (1774-1843) @kenzie45230 (3560)
• United States
22 Mar 11
I agree! Like you, I do find alternatives when I'm reading. When I'm listening to the speech of someone who needed about three more edits, I end up losing the message as I mentally re-do the speech.
Today, I chuckle at people who call themselves "professional writers" because they belong to a site that pays 3 cents per page view or if they've contracted to provide 200 word blurbs for $10 each. Bless their hearts. I'm sure they haven't researched what real writers earn.
And with the onslaught of "self-publishing" (which used to be vanity press), there are so many books going to print that have not had sufficient editing.
A few years ago, when I was going to the library on almost a daily basis, I discovered that at least one half of the "new releases" were self-published works. Sometimes I'd get curious, and then I'd feel so badly for the "writer" who put out a book with so many misspellings and grammatical errors.
Today, I chuckle at people who call themselves "professional writers" because they belong to a site that pays 3 cents per page view or if they've contracted to provide 200 word blurbs for $10 each. Bless their hearts. I'm sure they haven't researched what real writers earn.
And with the onslaught of "self-publishing" (which used to be vanity press), there are so many books going to print that have not had sufficient editing.
A few years ago, when I was going to the library on almost a daily basis, I discovered that at least one half of the "new releases" were self-published works. Sometimes I'd get curious, and then I'd feel so badly for the "writer" who put out a book with so many misspellings and grammatical errors.2 people like this
@Maggiepie (7816)
• United States
24 Mar 11
Uh...yuh. Whutever...

Maggiepie
"In art, economy is always beauty." ~ Henry James


Maggiepie
"In art, economy is always beauty." ~ Henry James1 person likes this
@Maggiepie (7816)
• United States
6 Apr 11
I rather suppose that not many do. I guess it's part of my anal retentive nature!
Maggiepie
"It is with words as with sunbeams, the more they are condensed, the deeper they burn." ~ Robert Southey, poet (1774-1843)
Maggiepie
"It is with words as with sunbeams, the more they are condensed, the deeper they burn." ~ Robert Southey, poet (1774-1843)@Maggiepie (7816)
• United States
24 Mar 11


Aw, Dawnald, gotta love your posts!!!
Maggiepie
"In art, economy is always beauty." ~ Henry James1 person likes this
@cream97 (29085)
• United States
5 Apr 11
Hi. Maggiepie. Yes, I have seen these type of sentences combined together with the wrong word. I usually will just read right through it until I can understand it with the word that I would rather use. And then again, when I am posting, I try to make sure that I use my words correctly so that others can know where I am coming from when it concerns the present and the past tense.

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@Maggiepie (7816)
• United States
12 Apr 11
Well, as I said, technically it's okay to say "had had," but to me, even though it's not "wrong," it just clashes in my aesthetic ear. I, also, must read until I understand, & once I do, I make that switch of which I spoke, to form a better arrangement in my mind.
That last sentence you wrote is one of my main goals. I do have trouble at times with tenses, so I'm extra careful!
Maggiepie
"The smallest feline is a masterpiece." ~ Leonardo da Vinci
@allyoftherain (7208)
• United States
22 Mar 11
LOL It bothers me too, but I'd never gone so far as to mentally change the wording. It buggers you that much, does it?
Technically there's nothing grammatically wrong with it, but who wants to be so redundant? I think your suggestions are infinitely more interesting to read. 
Technically there's nothing grammatically wrong with it, but who wants to be so redundant? I think your suggestions are infinitely more interesting to read. 1 person likes this
@Maggiepie (7816)
• United States
24 Mar 11
Well, as I said, I do realize it's a quirk of my own (though Kenzie says she does it, also). Still, thanks for the compliment!
Maggiepie
"In art, economy is always beauty." ~ Henry James










