Haiku – Saturday 14th November 2015

Photo taken by my friend Andy N – me performing poetry
Preston, England
November 14, 2015 9:28am CST
1/. What are you hail-stone? Olympian confetti Wedding of the gods 2/. Hard boiled rain from sky I did you in the last verse Don’t come back for more 3/. Ides of November Caesar you need not beware For five more months yet. 4/. ‘No Money Diet’ Surest way to lose your weight Author puts it on 5/. Method actor fired For asking motivation Behind zombie role. Arthur Chappell
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@boiboing (13147)
• Northampton, England
14 Nov 15
I steer clear of poetry online - most of it just makes me cringe and feel embarrassed for the authors. But I enjoy your haikus.
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@jaboUK (64346)
• United Kingdom
14 Nov 15
@boiboing You feel embarrassed for the authors? Cripes.
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@LadyDuck (502343)
• Italy
14 Nov 15
You are very good in creating Haiku, I have tried yesterday, but I cannot come out with something interesting.
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• Preston, England
14 Nov 15
you might find you are more interesting than you think and others do like your haikus
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• Preston, England
14 Nov 15
@LadyDuck I'm sure you will
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@LadyDuck (502343)
• Italy
14 Nov 15
@arthurchappell I will try until I come out with something not too bad.
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@Rollo1 (16676)
• Boston, Massachusetts
15 Nov 15
An excellent selection as usual. Hard boiled rain, so dangerous. I like the method actor, lol.
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@amadeo (111937)
• United States
14 Nov 15
Yes,he is good doing this.
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@amnabas (14877)
• Karachi, Pakistan
14 Nov 15
My friend previously i have asked you what haiku means but no response from your side i am too curious to know that.
@Drosophila (16568)
• Ireland
14 Nov 15
I do love the "no-money diet" guaranteed weight-loss!
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@jaboUK (64346)
• United Kingdom
14 Nov 15
I don't really like this verse form, but I like these. Very clever.
@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
14 Nov 15
Seriously, can't do a one word answer but the only thing going through my head right now is brrraaaaaiiinnnnnsss