Degrees of Separation

@sol_cee (38222)

Philippines

July 13, 2016 1:37am CST

I cherished my own solitude and believed I’ll be alone. Tended my own desolation, blissfulness already known. Never for one second did I imagine you would come. To show me how it’s to be adored and loved and cared and some. You got me out from the cramped box I sheltered myself for so long. I shouldn’t have felt so free, unbound that kind of happiness, so wrong. I trusted you with my own life, convinced you’d leave me never. But look what you did to me I am nothing better. (The contemplation of the discarded tea bag in the sink.)

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@jaboUK (64361)

• United Kingdom

13 Jul 16

Ok - you got me this time - I really thought you were being serious.

Very clever as usual

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@sol_cee (38222)

• Philippines

13 Jul 16

I can be serious. lol

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@Lucky15 (37346)

• Philippines

13 Jul 16

You could still.use it.haha

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@Lucky15 (37346)

• Philippines

14 Jul 16

@sol_cee you you. Haha Ohayo! (Good.morning!)

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@sol_cee (38222)

• Philippines

14 Jul 16

@Lucky15 Oh wow. You are early today. Not late. lol

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@Lucky15 (37346)

• Philippines

14 Jul 16

@sol_cee hahaha. Yes!

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@1hopefulman (45123)

• Canada

13 Jul 16

Wow! Another great one. You must have enough now to make a book.

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@1hopefulman (45123)

• Canada

13 Jul 16

@sol_cee I might buy one. How much would it cost me?

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@sol_cee (38222)

• Philippines

13 Jul 16

Never enough. And who will buy sir? lol

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@sol_cee (38222)

• Philippines

13 Jul 16

@1hopefulman lol you are so patronizing. Thanks for inflating my ego.

@SIMPLYD (90722)

• Philippines

13 Jul 16

It took me so long to guess what it is and i was wrong when i finally guessed .

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@sol_cee (38222)

• Philippines

13 Jul 16

What did you guess, if you don't mind my asking?

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@SIMPLYD (90722)

• Philippines

13 Jul 16

@sol_cee I thought it was a figurine in a box , carefully wrapped , forgotten to be displayed .

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@sol_cee (38222)

• Philippines

14 Jul 16

@SIMPLYD good idea ma'am.. hmm..

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@koopharper (7523)

• Canada

13 Jul 16

That is very well done. The final line is funny but if you publish this leave it off. Let your readers think what they want.

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@koopharper (7523)

• Canada

14 Jul 16

@sol_cee They'll want to make the sentiments grander.

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@koopharper (7523)

• Canada

14 Jul 16

@magallon (19280)

• Philippines

13 Jul 16

I thought it is about you..

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@magallon (19280)

• Philippines

13 Jul 16

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@toniganzon (72279)

• Philippines

13 Jul 16

Funny, I'm drinking my green tea at the moment.

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@sol_cee (38222)

• Philippines

13 Jul 16

Look at that beautiful specimen drinking green tea right now!

@skysnap (20154)

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13 Jul 16

haha i was like what the

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@sol_cee (38222)

• Philippines

13 Jul 16

What the! lol

@LadyDuck (460237)

• Switzerland

13 Jul 16

Your poems are great, I was asking myself what is this and I did not guess right this time.

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@sol_cee (38222)

• Philippines

13 Jul 16

Thanks Anna for the kind words.

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@miniam (9154)

• Bern, Switzerland

13 Jul 16

Lol,thought you were talking of a broken heart.

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