Another Ill-Fated Breakfast Limerick
@puddleglum (1380)
United States
20 responses
@BelleStarr (61413)
• United States
27 Aug 16
lol oh my, I hope this wasn't inspired by a real event.
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@puddleglum (1380)
• United States
27 Aug 16
Unfortunately, it was. It was a bad experience, so I tried to make the best of it. You know what they say, When life hands you lemons; make limericks. 
Okay, that was corny...
Okay, that was corny...2 people like this
@responsiveme (22924)
• India
12 Aug 16
Breakfast was a disaster,
Coz the chef did not master,
The art of making food
That was tasty and good,
Maybe, her cooking days are past her?
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@puddleglum (1380)
• United States
12 Aug 16
Very nice rhyme! You may have a point. The cook was either ready to retire or just learning to cook. Haha
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@responsiveme (22924)
• India
13 Aug 16
@puddleglum ha ha , could have been a newbie.....didn't think of that.
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@puddleglum (1380)
• United States
13 Aug 16
My coworkers experienced this pancake misfortune one Friday before work, so it fueled plenty of complaints around the water cooler that day. 
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@arthurchappell (44986)
• Preston, England
4 Sep 16
funny though those donuts sound awful lol
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@arthurchappell (44986)
• Preston, England
5 Sep 16
@puddleglum yes a I discovered a few days ago finding out the hard way that the milk had gone sour - yeuch!
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@puddleglum (1380)
• United States
5 Sep 16
Thanks. Breakfast can be a dangerous undertaking.
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@TheHorse (231948)
• Walnut Creek, California
7 Aug 16
@puddleglum Start pricing Porsches.
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@puddleglum (1380)
• United States
7 Aug 16
Excellent! Now I can collect my 5 cent marketing fee from Kellog's.
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@puddleglum (1380)
• United States
8 Aug 16
@TheHorse Shoot, I'm thinking a private plane.
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@fishtiger58 (29819)
• Momence, Illinois
29 Jul 16
Yikes doesn't sound good but love your limerick.
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@puddleglum (1380)
• United States
29 Jul 16
Thanks. I didn't eat the pancakes, but my friends did. They were still too traumatized to document the experience, so I did.
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@puddleglum (1380)
• United States
10 Sep 16
Thanks, Judy! Writing about food is fun, even when the food is less than desirable. 
@puddleglum (1380)
• United States
24 Aug 16
Thank you! For my coworkers, yes. I didn't order the pancakes--I just watched their horrified reactions and documented the experience.
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@crazyhorseladycx (39503)
• United States
3 Sep 16
{gigglin;} 'n trips to the loo no doubt :)
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@puddleglum (1380)
• United States
3 Sep 16
Haha. Yes, that part is in the limerick, uncut version. It's not for general audiences.
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@moffittjc (126077)
• Gainesville, Florida
7 Sep 16
Sounds like my cooking, although the pancakes I made yesterday didn't turn out as bad as I thought they would! lol
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@puddleglum (1380)
• United States
7 Sep 16
If you could eat more than one bite of your pancakes, then they were better than these. Haha
@sol_cee (38274)
• Philippines
2 Aug 16
@puddleglum and yet you made a nice limerick out of it. lol
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@BenRyanLee (224)
•
2 Sep 16
I like hotcakes but maybe it was just wasn't cooked well
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@puddleglum (1380)
• United States
2 Sep 16
I like homemade hot cakes. You could he right about them not being cooked well. Thanks for reading.
@puddleglum (1380)
• United States
13 Aug 16
They're not to be trusted. Thanks for reading.
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@IreneVincent (15960)
• United States
29 Jul 16
I enjoy limericks. This one is interesting. I haven't much tried to write limericks, but I do write Haiku and lots of poetry. I need to try to write limericks. Perhaps I will. Thanks for this one.
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@puddleglum (1380)
• United States
29 Jul 16
Haiku is a great form. I used to write a lot of them when I was in college. I was too busy for longer forms. Haha.
If you try limericks or other forms, I hope you'll share with us.
@acelawrites (19272)
• Philippines
29 Jul 16
I am curious whatever flavor they used to cause that pain in he stomach? Nice limerick.
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@puddleglum (1380)
• United States
29 Jul 16
They were plain pancakes, but our theory was that the milk in the batter was sour or something. 
