Callow Hallow *Poetry

Me - Lany
@Inlemay (17712)
South Africa
August 24, 2016 5:43am CST
Well I just had to reciprocate to @MALUSE post on the Puerile Poetry because that lovely youthful school photo needed a friend. I give to you my Callow Hallow: It was a horrid night when came in sight a lovely lady so light and bright for this I write for fear of fright! *Entry for this week's Suddendeath Poetry Challenge by @Jessicalynnt Assignment: Write a poem using the following words: write, fright, sight, light, night Photo is of me - I was nine years old.
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@ison_1 (1240)
24 Aug 16
Great poem...and what a lovely photo - unmistakably you :)
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@ison_1 (1240)
25 Aug 16
@Inlemay haha. that's put a morning smile on my face :)
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@ison_1 (1240)
25 Aug 16
@ison_1 erm..I can't believe I'm saying this - are we going to get anything new from you?
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@Inlemay (17712)
• South Africa
25 Aug 16
as I said to Janet - I am still me'er than me, its truer than true
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@JudyEv (382104)
• Rockingham, Australia
24 Aug 16
I have to ask - what colours were your blazer? It looks pretty bright.
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@Inlemay (17712)
• South Africa
25 Aug 16
Navy blue with light blue thin stripe and red stripe broader
@owlwings (43897)
• Cambridge, England
24 Aug 16
Wow! Another photo of a remarkably confident-looking and personable young lady! I would say that she looks rather the opposite of callow and, judging by the comprehensive library behind her (I wish I could read the authors and titles of some of those books!), her education was far from fallow! I never thought that striped blazers and ties suited girls, really. Somehow, they are OK for boys but not for girls. What were the colours?
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@Inlemay (17712)
• South Africa
25 Aug 16
Navy blue with light blue thin stripe and red stripe broader - I added a photo on Judy's response
@owlwings (43897)
• Cambridge, England
25 Aug 16
@Inlemay Quite tasteful. In my mind, I had the light-coloured (narrow) stripe as gold and the darker coloured (wider) one as red or green. Just shows how much is left to the imagination with black-and-white photographs! It reminds me of a story I heard once about a lady who took a (sepia) photo of her soldier son in to be coloured (as was often done in those days). The photographer asked what colour the boy's hair was and received the reply: "Just take his cap off and you'll see!".
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@Inlemay (17712)
• South Africa
26 Aug 16
@owlwings ha ha - we thought our uniform as excellent - and it still stands till today
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@jaboUK (64346)
• United Kingdom
24 Aug 16
Lovely photo - you can tell it's you.
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@Inlemay (17712)
• South Africa
25 Aug 16
I am still me'er than me, its truer than true
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
24 Aug 16
lol, a surprise entry! Always love finding these later, lovely!!!
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
25 Aug 16
Great picture of you. Good poem entry.
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@Inlemay (17712)
• South Africa
25 Aug 16
thank you - (curtsy)
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@Tampa_girl7 (54715)
• United States
24 Aug 16
what a darling photo
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@Inlemay (17712)
• South Africa
25 Aug 16
you are too kind
• United States
24 Aug 16
cute lil poem :) but not near's cute 's yerself when ya were 9. what a sweet pic!
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@Inlemay (17712)
• South Africa
25 Aug 16
ahh thank you - I was a very smart little lassy
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• New Delhi, India
24 Aug 16
You are still so young, marvelous
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@minders1 (83)
• Lagos, Nigeria
24 Aug 16
nice poem . i enjoyed going through it. I hope you will post more here on mylot. thanks.
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