Sudden Death - a poetry challenge

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@SophieY (891)
South Africa
October 27, 2016 2:56pm CST
Today’s words are: fall, turn, change, breath, balance. @Jessicalynnt and I decided to give it a go as we are in a turnabout season apposed to the Northern parts. I might not fall when life proves change, I might not fall when my breath turns slow, I might not fall when I loose all balance I might just fall behind my valance! Today I had coffee with a friend and when the waiter presented the "illy" coffee he said to us "Life is too short to drink bad coffee - enjoy" Spot on - nothing like good coffee, good friends its the Pinnacle of LIFE!
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@LadyDuck (502238)
• Italy
28 Oct 16
Illy is a coffee brand from my native country, Italy. My Mom buys this coffee since I was a little kid.
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@LadyDuck (502238)
• Italy
28 Oct 16
@SophieY It's surely my favorite espresso.
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@SophieY (891)
• South Africa
28 Oct 16
its one of the best served here
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@Inlemay (17712)
• South Africa
27 Oct 16
very different - didnt expect that from those words ** Coffee and friends are indeed the pinnacle of life
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@SophieY (891)
• South Africa
27 Oct 16
I wanted to use them differently to @Jessicalynnt
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@Jackalyn (7558)
• Oxford, England
28 Oct 16
Like the poem. You remind me of when my friend said to me "life is to short to worry about who will còok a chicken." Two friends were wanting to cook chicken for a church event and things got heated..
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@ison_1 (1240)
31 Oct 16
Very good! Disagree about coffee...it's an awful drink!
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
27 Oct 16
Oh what a lovely use of the words!!
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@SophieY (891)
• South Africa
27 Oct 16
Why thank you
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