There was An OldMan from Duluth

@Hatley (164231)
Garden Grove, California
April 18, 2017 3:24pm CST
There was An OldMan from Duluth Who wiggled and wagged a tooth HIs friends said pull that tooth' He said joking of course not that loose He was in back yard lost the tooth to a goose. One original limerick and graphic by P Hatley copyrighted 2017
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• Pamplona, Spain
18 Apr 17
No fun losing a tooth eh? I can see you are more like your usual self. Love the angle of the Avatar.
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@Hatley (164231)
• Garden Grove, California
18 Apr 17
yes finally feeling better yes I played around with that avatar had fun to
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• Pamplona, Spain
18 Apr 17
@Hatley Its all calmed down now then? That is good and glad for you. Take care.
@just4him (179920)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
18 Apr 17
So cute! Got a good chuckle from it. Well done!
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@Hatley (164231)
• Garden Grove, California
18 Apr 17
Thanks I had fun too writing it lol
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@just4him (179920)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
18 Apr 17
@Hatley It reads like you had fun writing it. That's what writing should be - fun!
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@Hatley (164231)
• Garden Grove, California
19 Apr 17
@just4him yes thats right it shoud be
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@CRK109 (14613)
• United States
18 Apr 17
roflmao!!!!! Oh, Patsie, this is hysterical! I'd love to know more about this story of him in the back yard with that goose! hahaha
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@Hatley (164231)
• Garden Grove, California
18 Apr 17
I picture these inmy mind then find the rhym and have a lot ov fun lol lol lol
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@CRK109 (14613)
• United States
19 Apr 17
@Hatley You bring us a lot of fun with them, too!
@marlina (85614)
• Canada
18 Apr 17
Did the goose choked on the tooth?
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@Hatley (164231)
• Garden Grove, California
18 Apr 17
no she squirted itout her rear end lol lol
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@marlina (85614)
• Canada
19 Apr 17
@Hatley LOL all right!
@KrauseHome (36748)
• United States
19 Apr 17
Cute. So did he tie a string to the goose?
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@Hatley (164231)
• Garden Grove, California
19 Apr 17
lol thankjs nope she popped the tooth out lol lol
@JudyEv (178745)
• Bunbury, Australia
18 Apr 17
Very creative Patsie!
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@Hatley (164231)
• Garden Grove, California
18 Apr 17
thanks I had fun writing it lol lol lo
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@jstory07 (83732)
• Roseburg, Oregon
18 Apr 17
What a cute limerick you wrote.
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@Hatley (164231)
• Garden Grove, California
18 Apr 17
thaks I had fun writing it too