Writer's Guild Meeting
@just4him (323168)
Green Bay, Wisconsin
January 2, 2018 9:23pm CST
They all liked my cupcake story, and I did a reading of the first chapter of Thread of Evidence, the novel I want to publish this year.
With their previous critique, I went through and revamped the first chapter. It was well received, with good feedback on it, for which I'm very happy.
I'm presently going through and making even more changes, not to what I read tonight, but realized that where I have been stopping as I read this to them, is the end of the chapter. So I've added a chapter to the book, and am making further changes, tightening it up even further. I am so grateful for this group. It really keeps me on my toes so I get it right.
I was also volunteered to be part of a panel for the Untitled Town event coming up in April. They needed four members and only had three. Now, mind you, I didn't volunteer to be the fourth, but my friend looked at me, and then the person talking about the need for the fourth person looked at us, and when the head of our group started talking about the panel and the members, she mentioned my name, quite by accident, and well, I had no choice as it seemed expected I would be part of the panel. So, one more step outside my comfort zone. I'm good with being volunteered for it.
It's getting late, and I need to be in the pool at 5 in the morning, so I will forgo notifications tonight and get at them in the morning.
I hope your day went well. Thanks for reading.
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@JohnRoberts (109841)
• Los Angeles, California
3 Jan 18
Good you had a successful meeting and they liked the cupcakes lol!
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@snowy22315 (208916)
• United States
3 Jan 18
It sounds like you had a good day today!
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@Courtlynn (67089)
• United States
3 Jan 18
I'm glad they enjoyed the mini story.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
3 Jan 18
Oh now, you're funning with me aren't you? I add a chapter by subdividing a chapter, which in this case was the first chapter, which now is three chapters. I tightened it up by eliminating all the extra unnecessary wordiness to it. That chapter, now three, reads so much better than it did before.
@andriaperry (118793)
• Anniston, Alabama
3 Jan 18
I am glad you are going for it. Have a good night.
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It was a very good meeting.




