Disheartened Soul

@rakski (156496)
Philippines
March 27, 2018 6:06am CST
Hello everyone. Yesterday,everything seems gone wrong There is sadness and aura of depression But still a lot has to be done I work, do chores but I felt so tired Cannot help but stare ouside I am trying, I am trying But my mind is not cooperating My heart is so heavy But the rain is not pouring Oh God, I plead Stop the feeling of emptiness in me I want to feel alive again As happy as can be. **Sorry to burst out. I just feel so empty yesterday.
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@Jessabuma (31696)
• Baguio, Philippines
27 Mar 18
Hello! Is this a kind of poetry?
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@rakski (156496)
• Philippines
27 Mar 18
I actually not sure. Do you think it can be a poetry? I am actually like this when I feel down, I can express much better like that.
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@Jessabuma (31696)
• Baguio, Philippines
27 Mar 18
@rakski I thought it was a kind of poetry. Hehe!!! You are being unique in expressing what you feel inside . I actually touch. But is it every thing fine now?
@hereandthere (45628)
• Philippines
27 Mar 18
do you still feel it today?
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@rakski (156496)
• Philippines
27 Mar 18
just a little. I am a bit distracted with the kids here with me and have to study in advance for my daughter's exams after the holy week.
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• Philippines
27 Mar 18
@rakski that will help keep it at bay
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@allknowing (153529)
• India
28 Mar 18
That was yesterday Right? Today is a new day and I am sure it has been different.
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@rakski (156496)
• Philippines
28 Mar 18
oh yes, the past two days is not so good. Today, it is getting better. thanks
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@louievill (28846)
• Philippines
27 Mar 18
Is this for real or a literary work? What's the reason for feeling down?
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@rakski (156496)
• Philippines
27 Mar 18
I wish I am very good at literary work. I am trying to see the reason why I feel so down too.
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@Shavkat (141905)
• Philippines
27 Mar 18
I am sorry that you feel gloomy today. What's wrong?
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@Shavkat (141905)
• Philippines
27 Mar 18
@rakski It happens, my friend. I had this kind of moment. We just need to keep on moving forward after having this kind of situation.
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@rakski (156496)
• Philippines
27 Mar 18
@Shakvat probably because some of the things you expect and work hard for might not be as promising as it should be.
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@mlgen1037 (29882)
• Manila, Philippines
27 Mar 18
That is simple yet striking. Very nice. I hope everything is okay.
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@rakski (156496)
• Philippines
27 Mar 18
thanks
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@mlgen1037 (29882)
• Manila, Philippines
27 Mar 18
@rakski youre most welcome.
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@LadyDuck (502605)
• Italy
27 Mar 18
There is a reason why you feel so down today? I hope you are going to feel better soon.
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@rakski (156496)
• Philippines
27 Mar 18
thank you.
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@Icydoll (36713)
• India
27 Mar 18
Are you alright now???
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@rakski (156496)
• Philippines
27 Mar 18
a bit yes. That is also the reason why I have to tell you mylotters.... I really have no one here to confide it with except for the kids
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@rheicel (7065)
• Philippines
27 Mar 18
Don't be sad. Cheer up everything will be okay just pray.
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