Disheartened Soul
By rakski
@rakski (156496)
Philippines
March 27, 2018 6:06am CST
Hello everyone.
Yesterday,everything seems gone wrong
There is sadness and aura of depression
But still a lot has to be done
I work, do chores but I felt so tired
Cannot help but stare ouside
I am trying, I am trying
But my mind is not cooperating
My heart is so heavy
But the rain is not pouring
Oh God, I plead
Stop the feeling of emptiness in me
I want to feel alive again
As happy as can be.
**Sorry to burst out. I just feel so empty yesterday.










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9 responses
@Jessabuma (31696)
• Baguio, Philippines
27 Mar 18
Hello! Is this a kind of poetry?
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@Jessabuma (31696)
• Baguio, Philippines
27 Mar 18
@rakski I thought it was a kind of poetry. Hehe!!! You are being unique in expressing what you feel inside . I actually touch. But is it every thing fine now?
@hereandthere (45628)
• Philippines
27 Mar 18
@rakski that will help keep it at bay
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@allknowing (153529)
• India
28 Mar 18
That was yesterday Right? Today is a new day and I am sure it has been different.
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@louievill (28846)
• Philippines
27 Mar 18
Is this for real or a literary work? What's the reason for feeling down?
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@mlgen1037 (29882)
• Manila, Philippines
27 Mar 18
That is simple yet striking. Very nice. I hope everything is okay. 
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I am trying to see the reason why I feel so down too.




