I Want To Bring My Faith Back
@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
June 26, 2018 8:09am CST
I put my fate on heaven’s hand
To lead me to what was written
No more debate, no angry stand
Time teaches me how to listen
Outside the gate a lonelier land
Gloominess has me imprisoned
Hope it’s not late to join the band
To chant refrain of repentance.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
26 Jun 18
Thank you for the correction. I'm just a complicated person searching for a place where I should belong. Skeptical on things especially about religion. Hopefully, one day I will find my inner peace. Thank you.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
26 Jun 18
I'm certain they will not. It is my new poem and never posted online just here. Thank you.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
27 Jun 18
@1hopefulman But what bother me now if I can possibly post this one to the other site after posting it here...
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@arthurchappell (44941)
• Preston, England
26 Jun 18
nice poem though not being religious it is a pleasant enough read
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@arthurchappell (44941)
• Preston, England
26 Jun 18
@simplfred or the grown ups much of the time too
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
26 Jun 18
Thank you so much. Yeah, I know, I read some of your stuff and definitely they exposed a lot of truth. To be honest I admire it. Though, I don't want to complicate everything sometimes. But my faith still complicated to explain in the eyes of the child.
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@Letranknight2015 (52665)
• Philippines
28 Jun 18
There are moments were we tend to go astray and come back once we realize our mistakes.
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@quantum2020 (12054)
• Ciudad De Mexico, Mexico
26 Jun 18
The heaven is the best place to put one's fate. Very nice poem
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
27 Jun 18
Yeah, it is a gift a gift I think and a curse as well. Thank You.
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@ridingbet (66854)
• Philippines
27 Jun 18
nice poem but i somehow missed the 'religious' part of it
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
26 Jun 18
I think I would agree. Though sometime we need religion for reason.
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@MarshaMusselman (38865)
• Midland, Michigan
29 Jun 18
Gloominess and depression certainly does tie people up, when w we remember a and meditate on what Christ accomplished for us it's much easier to s see the sunlight or silver lining
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