Arbitrary

United States
July 1, 2018 1:36pm CST
Bridges that are old with wood that is molded, warped and soggy. Water that is cold and filled with sewage and plastic drink rings. A riverbank that seems to get further the closer you get to it. A man who you aren't sure you should trust or get away from. The sky darkening with the promise of rain and the threat of thunder. Cold and shivering limbs that turn to ice and refuse to move. Nowhere to look, no safe place to go. Pieces of bridge plunge into the water. Mildewed and threadbare rope that offers no assistance. And then you awaken, cold, shivering and frightened.
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@velvet53 (24417)
• Palisade, Colorado
3 Jul 18
Great expressions! You should turn this into a story.
• United States
3 Jul 18
It was based off of a dream I had. I'm sure with a little work and some fabrications I could turn it into a fantastic story. Thank You!
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@velvet53 (24417)
• Palisade, Colorado
3 Jul 18
@ScribbledAdNauseum I will be waiting to read it.
• United States
3 Jul 18
@velvet53 It may be a few days or even next week. I'll have to think on it a bit and make it as short as possible. A lot of people here will not read long posts.
@GardenGerty (169447)
• United States
3 Jul 18
Very chilling and wrenching. It feels like a start to a suspense novel.
• United States
3 Jul 18
It was somewhat of a bad dream. I seem to be having a lot of dreams around water lately.