Haiku 19th January 2019

Me performing poetry - photo taken by Andy N
Preston, England
January 19, 2019 2:08pm CST
1/. Quiet pub Thursday Warm happy feeling inside Bus calls last orders 2/. Other diners choose Better orders than I pick I taste jealousy 3/. All holy silence Shattered by ring tone madness In Pearly Gate queue 4/. For Haiku press one Hash-key two for a sonnet Dial-a-bard service 5/. Sleeps with the fish No he’s not dead, just dreaming Hugging tinned pilchards Arthur Chappell
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@crossbones27 (52905)
• Mojave, California
19 Jan 19
Those are quite fun. Well done brother. I like saying Haiku. Its fun try it. Haikuuuuu.
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• Preston, England
19 Jan 19
@crossbones27 it is a great word
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• Mojave, California
19 Jan 19
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@celticeagle (189820)
• Boise, Idaho
20 Jan 19
Interesting.
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• China
20 Jan 19
I like the second one.To be honest,I don't get the others.
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@JWMILLER (3275)
• Westmoreland, Tennessee
28 Feb 19
Entertaining, thanks
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@acelawrites (19272)
• Philippines
19 Jan 19
I like the last one! "Sleeping with the fish!"
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@responsiveme (22923)
• India
21 Jan 19
5, 1, 2, 4, 3...this time for me in order of liking But all are very good
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@amadeo (111937)
• United States
19 Jan 19
I like the first one.
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@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
19 Jan 19
Excellent haiku!! Not easy 2 do!! These turned out pretty good!!
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