Shattered

@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
February 6, 2019 3:00pm CST
Can't dream a lovely scene When the heart is broken Light was dim, grass not green The bolt of grief is open The lullaby sang Killed the rainbow Noah's rain, flooded pain A desperate tomorrow Can't paint a flamboyant view My muse is dead Lovely rose, heaven knows Now, I will paint death instead... 5-12-2016 9:15 PM Mysterious Aries / Simplfred Image: www.touchtalent.com/painting/art/a-broken-heart-2280
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@CarolDM (203396)
• Nashville, Tennessee
6 Feb 19
Such sad raw emotion.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
6 Feb 19
Thank you for reading, once again...
@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
6 Feb 19
Powerful emotions!!
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@jobelbojel (36796)
• Philippines
7 Feb 19
You really are good in written verses.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
7 Feb 19
Thanks for that, my friend.
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@anil02 (24688)
• India
7 Feb 19
Happiness is shadow but sadness is life.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
7 Feb 19
That's a deep quote, my friend.
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@anil02 (24688)
• India
8 Feb 19
@simplfred Yes but it is truth
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
8 Feb 19
@anil02 Well, agree.
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@SIMPLYD (90717)
• Philippines
11 Feb 19
So filled with emotions! Hatred , sadness and frustration.. . are they your emotions too when you composed this poem? But it is beautiful. . .
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@SIMPLYD (90717)
• Philippines
11 Feb 19
@simplfred It's beautiful. You are a good poet. Keep it up!
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Feb 19
@SIMPLYD Yeah, I hope I can make another one. Been awhile but I still have a lot ofbols stuff to share here.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Feb 19
Some of my poems dance with my emotion. Some don't. I can't remember what inspired me to write this one but this is one of my favorite work.
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@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
6 Feb 19
No other poetry stirs my emotions like this does!!! You should enter a poetry contests!! There are many on the internet!! Is this your emotions or just poetry??!!
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@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
7 Feb 19
@simplfred I'm going to look for the contests!! They are legit and people win money and prizes!!!
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
7 Feb 19
I've already won. Your comment and appreciation is already a trophy for me... I think it is both, could be called emotional poetry. Ha ha. Thanks really.
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