If I Am

@Strenj (120)
Baguio, Philippines
April 9, 2019 7:21am CST
If I am the moon, I will give you the stars. If I am the sun, I will give you the clouds. If I am the rain, I will give you the rainbow. If I am the thunder, are you going to fear me? .................... If I am the wind, I will give you the warmest hug. If I am the sea, I will wash away all your pains. If I am the light, I will brighten all your days. If I am the night, are you going to curse and hate me? .................... If I am a bird, I will sing a song for you. If I am a leaf, I will dance for you. If I am a mountain, I will stand for you. If I am a rock, are you going to break me into pieces? .................... All these masterpieces... to let you know that I am but merely a human. to tell you that I am but an ordinary being. to let you know that I can do these things. If only I were born to any of these masterpieces.
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@Junbals (1421)
• Philippines
9 Apr 19
Nice poetry you have there! Sounds nostalgic!
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@Strenj (120)
• Baguio, Philippines
9 Apr 19
Thanks much @Junbals! :) It's my pleasure in my heart though.
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9 Apr 19
This is really good! I want to read it again
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10 Apr 19
@Strenj the last paragraph in poem got me thinking about something the writer of the creation did or did not intend perhaps.
@Strenj (120)
• Baguio, Philippines
10 Apr 19
@mynameiskate What do you mean by that?
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@Strenj (120)
• Baguio, Philippines
10 Apr 19
Thank you so much for your appreciation! I love it!
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@whiteream (8567)
• United States
13 Apr 19
What an amazing poem. I love your work.
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@whiteream (8567)
• United States
14 Apr 19
@Strenj I find. Nice to see you again. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
@Strenj (120)
• Baguio, Philippines
14 Apr 19
Thank you for the compliment, Brenda. I remember meeting you at Niume! How are you?
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@kobesbuddy (74553)
• East Tawas, Michigan
10 Apr 19
Good one, thanks for sharing it:)
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@kobesbuddy (74553)
• East Tawas, Michigan
10 Apr 19
@Strenj I write poetry, it's a part of who I am:)
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@Strenj (120)
• Baguio, Philippines
10 Apr 19
Thank you, Kharla. My pleasure!
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@Strenj (120)
• Baguio, Philippines
10 Apr 19
@kobesbuddy Nice to hear that from you! Can't wait to read some o your poems, one of these days.
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9 Apr 19
If only I could write like this..
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10 Apr 19
@Strenj I'm not good at writing..
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@Strenj (120)
• Baguio, Philippines
10 Apr 19
Why not? :) I believe you can do that also. Can't wait to see yours! :)
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@Strenj (120)
• Baguio, Philippines
10 Apr 19
Don't be so hard on yourself. Believe that you can. It might takes time but what matters at the end of the day is you have learn to improve yourself. Just don't give up too easily. :)
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@DianeBorg (784)
• Malta
9 Apr 19
Beautiful Poem.
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@Strenj (120)
• Baguio, Philippines
10 Apr 19
Thank you Diane!
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• Malta
10 Apr 19
@Strenj Welcome .
@GardenGerty (157551)
• United States
11 Apr 19
I like the images you bring with your words.
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@Strenj (120)
• Baguio, Philippines
11 Apr 19
Thank you, Heather. :) It' my pleasure to have you here.
@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
14 May 19
Bravo. This is an awesome poem. I love this one. Wow. Very powerful.
@LeaPea2417 (36438)
• Toccoa, Georgia
11 Apr 19
That is very good.
@Strenj (120)
• Baguio, Philippines
11 Apr 19
Thank you, Anne! Looking forward to read some poems from you.
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@josie_ (9763)
• Philippines
24 Apr 19
Nice poem. What was your inspiration or should I ask who was your inspiration? I occasionally dabble in poetry but they're usually of a melancholy nature.
@josie_ (9763)
• Philippines
25 Apr 19
@Strenj _Likewise.
@Strenj (120)
• Baguio, Philippines
25 Apr 19
Myself. :) I'm but an amateur yet.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
10 Apr 19
It is really nice to know if someone will love us during our ups and even more especially when we are down. Understand us when we seem like a thunder. Give candles during our night. Won't show paper when our hand sign is a rock (ha ha). It is a nice feeling when someone love us for who we are...
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@Strenj (120)
• Baguio, Philippines
10 Apr 19
True, true! You're right kabayan! How to be you po? He he.
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@debjani1 (7207)
11 Apr 19
Nice poem to read. But seems to be sad. Love the poem. Creates a feeling.
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@Strenj (120)
• Baguio, Philippines
11 Apr 19
Thanks much, Debjani. Why not share yours too.
@emelas (120)
• Maputo, Mozambique
16 Apr 19
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