Broken Beginnings Heads off In Unexpected Direction
@Michellekidwell (29953)
Sonora, California
May 30, 2019 10:21pm CST
I felt something was missing in the original draft of Broken Beginnings despite the complexity of the storyline and over the past few writing sessions, it clicked, but today especially so!
There were key parts of the story that were either overlooked by me, or glossed over, so I knew though the bones of the story would essentially stay the same, there would also be layers added on to it. Layers that are crucial.
I used to get it at times that as a Christian author I shouldn’t broach certain subject matters but as an author, and a Christian I feel that God gives me these stories to tell even if they aren’t exactly fairytales and honestly if you look at the original fairytales you’d learn they weren’t exactly what we see today in the newer versions!
Anyway Broken Beginnings is slowly getting life breathed back into it, and I think I am more excited about the rewrites than I was the original draft Lol!
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@hexeduser22 (7418)
• Philippines
31 May 19
I think it will only get better and better.
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@Michellekidwell (29953)
• Sonora, California
31 May 19
Thank you and I certainly hope so!
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@hexeduser22 (7418)
• Philippines
31 May 19
@Michellekidwell You and some other mylotters here inspired me to write, so I know it will turn out great.
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@Michellekidwell (29953)
• Sonora, California
31 May 19
@hexeduser22 I am glad to hear that, that’s my intention!
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@MommyOfEli2013 (89581)
• Rupert, Idaho
31 May 19
That's great to hear that you are excited about the rewrites....that's always fun!
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@andriaperry (118793)
• Anniston, Alabama
31 May 19
I am glad it opened up to you what was needed.
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@LindaOHio (222310)
• United States
31 May 19
I'm glad you're enjoying it so much.
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@Michellekidwell (29953)
• Sonora, California
31 May 19
Due to the subject matter I’m not sure if enjoying is the right word, but I am excited about the prospects of the story! Thank you so much!
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