ILLUSION

@db20747 (43419)
Washington, District Of Columbia
October 23, 2019 9:12pm CST
Your face is like an illusion. I reach for it but it is not real. Yet it is there. Clear as Crystals. You are far away, yet you are near. Is it a dream? A dream that cannot be? Am I imagining your arms wrapped around my shoulders? I will fly through the nite to where your are until the sun rises and the alarm goes off. I have been to a far away place to a far away love.
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RasmaSandra
@RasmaSandra (98033)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
24 Oct 19
That is absolutely beautiful and the photo
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Danna B.
@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
24 Oct 19
Thank you!! I am not a good writer of poetry, but this one turned out pretty good!!
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Hope
@1hopefulman (45111)
• Canada
24 Oct 19
Sometimes, love is just a beautiful dream!
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Hope
@1hopefulman (45111)
• Canada
24 Oct 19
@db20747 Does it seem real or is it real? I do hope you find your dream man. Keeping busy my friend, keeping busy!
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Danna B.
@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
24 Oct 19
Yes, a beautiful dream that seems real!!
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Danna B.
@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
24 Oct 19
4 got 2 add, how in the world have you been?!
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Oshy
@TiarasOceanView (70020)
• United States
24 Oct 19
I was fine until you mentioned that dang alarm
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Oshy
@TiarasOceanView (70020)
• United States
24 Oct 19
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Danna B.
@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
24 Oct 19
Yeah, it woke me up!!
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Anna
@LadyDuck (502573)
• Italy
24 Oct 19
Beautiful poem and beautiful photo.
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Danna B.
@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
24 Oct 19
Thank you!! I'm going to try to publish this one!! This one was pretty good!!
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Anna
@LadyDuck (502573)
• Italy
24 Oct 19
@db20747 I agree, you should publish it.
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Danna B.
@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
24 Oct 19
@LadyDuck now I know I have a good poem, if Anna also thinks it's good!!
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Frederick Espiritu
@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
25 Oct 19
A long distant relationship surely a hard situation to deal with... You have perfectly portrayed the feeling, my friend...
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Danna B.
@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
25 Oct 19
Thank u!! I like this poem!! I wrote with my emotions at the moment!!
Nocturnal Writer
@Nakitakona (59987)
• Philippines
24 Oct 19
Sometimes we want to stay away from reality and we want to live and enjoy the illusion.
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Danna B.
@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
24 Oct 19
Yes, illusions Let's us have what we do not!!
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Nocturnal Writer
@Nakitakona (59987)
• Philippines
24 Oct 19
@db20747 Sometimes I am playing with it.
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LK2018
@Letranknight2015 (52665)
• Philippines
24 Oct 19
I can be happy if I were dreaming of flying.
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Danna B.
@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
24 Oct 19
I'm always dreaming of flying!!
Judy Story
@jstory07 (148735)
• Roseburg, Oregon
24 Oct 19
IT sounds like you were at a far away place with a far away love. I like what you wrote.
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Danna B.
@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
24 Oct 19
Yes, illusions can seem real!!
Jabo
@jaboUK (64346)
• United Kingdom
24 Oct 19
Dreams can seem so real. Lovely poem.
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Danna B.
@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
24 Oct 19
Thank you!! Especially when you dream of someone U admire who is far away!!
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