Writing poem challenge
@Nakitakona (56302)
Philippines
April 7, 2020 1:51am CST
This is to accept the challenge of @JESSY3236 to write a poem.
Words used: family, quarantine, heartbreaking, emotion, Frontliners, home, obedient
Waking up this morning
A group of food handlers throngs outside
Family food packs handed in
To families in home quarantine.
"It's heartbreaking."
The village chieftain's emotion
Seeing posters people's doors
"Thanks frontliners."
The crisis soon vanished
Like bubbles in the air
When people stay at home
United and obedient.
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9 responses
@JESSY3236 (19057)
• United States
8 Apr 20
@Nakitakona here's my post:
This one was done by @Nakitakona who request me to a poem. This one won't rhyme sorry. The words used family, quarantine, heartbreaking, emotion,...
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@Nakitakona (56302)
• Philippines
8 Apr 20
@JESSY3236 oh yeah. I have read. It's well done. Congrats.
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Have a nice Tuesday.
@amitkokiladitya (171935)
• Agra, India
7 Apr 20
This is a good challenge. I will also try to pen something down
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@amitkokiladitya (171935)
• Agra, India
7 Apr 20
@Nakitakona ok
As soon as I succeed
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@Butterfingers (66585)
• India
7 Apr 20
You are blessed to write poems and take challenges
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@Nakitakona (56302)
• Philippines
7 Apr 20
That's very nice to hear. You're blessed too
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@innertalks (21157)
• Australia
8 Apr 20
That's a good effort at meeting that challenge.
I noticed you used the words in the same order listed above the poem.
Was that part of the challenge too?
There is something special about poetry. I like poetry too.
The way that words connect brings power out of those words, not there before, and this is very true in good poems too.
@Nakitakona (56302)
• Philippines
8 Apr 20
I should have listed them alphabetically. The important thing that I used them.
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