Try To See The Unseen
@RoshniMahasweta (309)
July 22, 2020 8:45am CST
Try to see the unseen joy that lies within us,
Try to see the unseen stories behind all truths and lies,
Try to see the unseen promises that you'll never understand,
And try to see the unseen pain that is hidden within the joyful eyes,
Try to see the unseen wishes that'll never fulfill,
Try to see the unseen love which silently takes place,
Just try at least once in a life time inspite of all restrictions and prejudices...
- rOsHnI mAhAsWeTa
Hi Guys! How are you all? How's your day?
What do you think about it? Wrote long ago. Let me know how can I improve my poems?
Stay safe, stay connected...
Have a joyful evening...
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@sparial02 (858)
• India
22 Jul 20
It's not good to waste time on the wishes that never going to fulfill. But yeah, I am ready to waste time when I see there is a possible opportunity. I don't care If it's not going to be successful, it's okay but if it's worth it, then I am going to try for it. I don't like regretting much, so I just keep trying.
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@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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22 Jul 20
Wish gives us hope. Hope gives us motivation to move forward. We must keep trying cause life goes on no matter what.
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@sparial02 (858)
• India
23 Jul 20
@RoshniMahasweta Someone said - "Hope is a mistake, If you can't fix what's broken, You"ll go insane."
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@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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23 Jul 20
@sparial02 well, then the person is wrong. But the last is true. If you can't fix what's broken, you'll go insane. Hope towards a new beginning will make us fix what's broken unless we can't live
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@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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28 Jul 20
@Butterfingers thanks a ton dear for your continuous effort
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@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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22 Jul 20
Which one did you like most the pic or the poem?
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@sparial02 (858)
• India
22 Jul 20
I am good by the way, hope you are well too. Just keep working on your poems, see there is no such advice as poems directly come from your heart. So keep writing, if you see people can connect themselves with the poem, then its good, or else just keep writing.
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@sparial02 (858)
• India
24 Jul 20
@RoshniMahasweta Read lots of other poems. Read dictionary. Keep writing, one day you can create some gem.
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@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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22 Jul 20
Thank you very much dear. But I want to improve.
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@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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22 Jul 20
Couldn't understand. Can you elaborate please?
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@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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28 Jul 20
What? Sorry I couldn't understand what you said. Tell me more
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@innertalks (21026)
• Australia
23 Jul 20
That's a good meaningful poem.
Seeing the unseen allows us to see that the grace that life gives us can prepare us for its meal, but only if we are not greedy, and want more than our own fair share.
I think that repeating the line "try to see the unseen" works well in your poem, and drives home your main message in the poem too.
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@innertalks (21026)
• Australia
23 Jul 20
@RoshniMahasweta The Dalia Lama, of Tibet tells us that the goal of life is happiness.
I myself think, though, that happiness is not a goal, nor a destination to be reached.
Is God himself happy, or is happiness more something that arrives on your doorstep, from your loving?
I would say that happiness cannot be found in anything of itself, nor in any pursuit of anything looking for it.
Happiness comes out of its cocoon, or corner, when you allow it to do so, by itself, and then it transforms itself in/into you, giving you the wings of itself, so you fly around with happiness's wings attached to you then too, and so you are then transformed too.
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@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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23 Jul 20
I'm glad you liked and understood why I repeated the line. Sometimes we are too busy to understand the little happiness within us. We worry about the bad things happen in our life. We only see or feel fear, insecurity what life gives us but to notice those little opportunities to be happy just for a moment
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@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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28 Jul 20
@innertalks I think happiness is itself a choice
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