Short story: Making the right notes is about making the right notes, in both body, and mind.
By emptychair
@innertalks (23740)
Australia
August 12, 2021 7:52pm CST
Alf Wagman, was getting old, and he kept thinking to himself about the life that he had already lived. He was unhappy with it in a sort of a happy way.
He could have done more, he knew, but he could have done a whole lot less too.
Overall, his life had been relatively smooth sailing.
He had always had work, good health, and he lived in a country with no problems that affected his living much either.
Nevertheless, he was not contented, and so he tried to find some pursuit in his retirement years that might give him some extra satisfaction too.
He took up piano playing, even as his now deceased father used to do.
At 70 plus years of age, Alf became a concert pianist, and he travelled all over the World, playing his piano.
When arthritis hit his hands though, a mere five years later, he had had enough, and he retired again this time for good, into the comfort of a nursing home, where after five years of vegetative living, he died.
Are we the life in our years then, or the years in our life?
For Alf, it was a matter of whether his body was still fully alive, or not, and if not, he then became not fully alive either.
We are more than our body though, and we should not give up, even when it seemingly gives up on us.
We should run our race, and live each stage as it comes to us to live, and never sit on the sidelines of life, just watching it going by.
"One does not play the piano with one's fingers: one plays the piano with one's mind."
Glenn Gould, (1932 to 1982), a Canadian musician said this.
Alf of course knew this too, but he could not play it, his piano, with his mind alone.
He did need his fingers too.
We also need our bodies to live our life, but when they start giving up on us, we should still try to work with them, within them still too. We should not give up in our minds, also.
Photo Credit: The photo used in this article was sourced from the free media site, pixabay.com
Picture: Alf, at his piano, had found new life in his years, until tears came, with added fears. It was only the black notes that he allowed himself to see then. He should have kept seeing the white ones too.
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@DocAndersen (54399)
• United States
14 Aug 21
interesting
you ask a question that i am going to modify because I want to!!! Does, the body live without us? Or, is the essence of the body us?
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@innertalks (23740)
• Australia
15 Aug 21
I would say that the essence of anything is the soul of it, and our soul is us in its own way, and the body is us in its own way too.
Every part of creation is itself, but the real essence of all is God, and his love which penetrates to the core of all else.
All exists as itself, even the body, but the essence exists throughout all too, and is that part, as much as the part links to the essence.
We exist without a body as an essence, but we gain something from the body too, the real essence of what our essence is. One thing always leads to another. All serves all.
@innertalks (23740)
• Australia
15 Aug 21
@DocAndersen Of course, you do not know that about a tree, for certain; perhaps, it has a soul, personality, thoughts too, but just a limited brain, if any to run these through itself.
The essence of God is his truth, which travels as an essence, as spirit, or as a consciousness field, out from his love, and which all can drink into themselves too.
Our essence is the same; it is the field of truth around us too, which others can feel and know sometimes as our aura, but really, it is far more than just that. It is the energy field of love, which emanates from love, as love loves, in a similar way as which a magnetic field arises from moving electricity moving through a conduit, or travelling vehicle.
@DocAndersen (54399)
• United States
15 Aug 21
@innertalks now i am curious, i believe the essence of a person is the compilation (soul, personality, thoughts)
the essence of a tree, that is much different.
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@RasmaSandra (98005)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
13 Aug 21
The body must always be in tune with the mind, When the mind gets clouded the body should be able to liven up the mood and get the mind back on track and then the body slows down the mind should be able to get it to start moving again both mind and body in perfect harmony,
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@innertalks (23740)
• Australia
13 Aug 21
Yes, that's nicely described how it is best for our mind to work with our body, and our body with our mind.
If we get out of harmony, as Alf did here, it is a recipe for a disaster, and when not in harmony, one part can give up on the other part, then too.
Both our mind and our body should play their part, and they should also understand each part's role in our life too, and support each other, as needed too, as you also said too.
@41CombedaleRoad (5966)
• Greece
15 Aug 21
I admire Alf's spirit. I believe that as long as we are here there is a reason for it. So life should not be allowed to fade away. We have to fight on. We might not have the punch we had but we still have the fighting spirit,
@innertalks (23740)
• Australia
16 Aug 21
Yes, we need to keep going on, as much as we can.
We need to keep painting life with ourselves, to see the brightness of life still shining at us from its picture perfectness, too, whatever age, that we are.
Otherwise, life might lose some of its lustre to us, as we need to add ourselves to life, for it to fully give itself to us.
@Shiva49 (28380)
• Singapore
13 Aug 21
The body gains the upper hand as we close in on the exit door.
Our mind fights valiantly but it is a losing battle in the end.
However, very few manage to smile despite great physical discomfort.
I have also seen some not their usual self and cannot reconcile that age had caught up with them giving credence to epithets like "grumpy old man". And some have it really tough as they did not prepare to get old mentally and financially. When others start to treat them differently, it is more than a shocker for them, sadly.
My father knew his halcyon days were over and did not want to prolong his life while my mother even enjoyed her last trying years and faced them stoically.
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@innertalks (23740)
• Australia
14 Aug 21
@Shiva49 My parents were one month off 60 years together.
I am glad that I am older than my wife, as I feel that I would like to be the first of us to go too.
I would not like my much younger wife to die before I do. She is 12 years younger.
@Shiva49 (28380)
• Singapore
14 Aug 21
@innertalks I know many Indian wives want to outlive their men as they know husbands would be lost without them. Though things have changed, I have seen wives at the beck and call of their husbands for their basic needs that extend to food.
Women are set free when demanding husbands die first. Women are useful around the house while men are quite the opposite. This applies to traditional Indian families. My mother might have had a more relaxed life after my father passed away after over fifty years together.
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@Shiva49 (28380)
• Singapore
14 Aug 21
@innertalks We are six and half years apart, a norm then in India.
Parting leaves the survivor lost, a void some cannot get over it.
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