Poem To The World

@Kandae11 (57231)
March 10, 2022 6:04pm CST
I wrote this poem some years ago when there was another crisis involving people fleeing their country. We are all members of the human race; Who sets the pace? Who decides what trials we face? In some countries people live peaceful lives; In others, conflict and mayhem continue to rise. Thousands flee their homes every day; Nowhere to go, nowhere to stay. Tired and drawn, unhappy and worn; Some dragging battered suitcases with handles broken or torn. I think of the children deprived of a home; The many children who are forced to roam How l wish the world would become a better place; Embracing every member of the human race. Pixabay image
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@RubyHawk (99367)
• Atlanta, Georgia
11 Mar 22
I agree with your poem wholeheartedly. We can do better.
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@Kandae11 (57231)
11 Mar 22
Yes we can.l am glad you agree.
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@RubyHawk (99367)
• Atlanta, Georgia
11 Mar 22
@Kandae11 I certainly do agree.
@RasmaSandra (98005)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
11 Mar 22
It is a very wonderful heartfelt and meaningful poem,
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@RasmaSandra (98005)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
11 Mar 22
@Kandae11 same here
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@Kandae11 (57231)
11 Mar 22
It came from the heart. It is really upsetting to me when l see what other people must endure. I count my blessings every day.
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@choijungeun (2710)
• Hangzhou, China
11 Mar 22
It's really a warm-hearted poem,i wish everyone in this world can get the peaceful and blissful life
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@Kandae11 (57231)
11 Mar 22
We continue to hope and do what we can to contribute.
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@JudyEv (382107)
• Rockingham, Australia
11 Mar 22
I think you've done really well with this. It must be awful to be trying to find a new country to make a home in.
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@Kandae11 (57231)
11 Mar 22
Thank you. Some leave home with just a few necessities. Everything else is left behind.
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@Dena91 (17039)
• United States
11 Mar 22
Beautifully written
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@Kandae11 (57231)
11 Mar 22
Thank you.
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@CarolDM (203396)
• Nashville, Tennessee
11 Mar 22
Wow this is great writing. And i feel the emotions with each word. I too wish for a better world soon. Well done.
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@Kandae11 (57231)
11 Mar 22
Thank you. I feel it in my heart when l see what the refugees have to endure.
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@CarolDM (203396)
• Nashville, Tennessee
11 Mar 22
@Kandae11 I totally understand.
@shaggin (74987)
• United States
11 Mar 22
Very nicely written! My son has a new kid in his class from Ukraine.
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@Kandae11 (57231)
11 Mar 22
Really! Is he or she a refugee?
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@shaggin (74987)
• United States
11 Mar 22
@Kandae11 my son said no but I think they are. I’m glad they made it out.
@snowy22315 (208913)
• United States
11 Mar 22
I love the sentiments expressed in your poem. It says it all.
@Kandae11 (57231)
11 Mar 22
Thanks. I was really feeling it when l wrote it.
@RebeccasFarm (91297)
• United States
11 Mar 22
You have a very good heart in this poem Kandase. It says it in a nutshell.
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@Kandae11 (57231)
11 Mar 22
Thank you.
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@jstory07 (148734)
• Roseburg, Oregon
11 Mar 22
We are all humans no matter what and everyone should be treated the same.
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@Kandae11 (57231)
11 Mar 22
Definitely
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@DianneN (254926)
• United States
11 Mar 22
Beautiful and relevant poem
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@Kandae11 (57231)
15 Mar 22
Thank you.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
11 Mar 22
Well said. Thank you for sharing.
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@Kandae11 (57231)
11 Mar 22
You're welcome. Thank you for reading.
@acelawrites (19272)
• Philippines
14 Mar 22
Beautiful poem; very fitting these days with the Ukraine crisis.Praying for the people especially the children of Ukraine!
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@Kandae11 (57231)
14 Mar 22
Yes we do need to add prayer to our contribution toward peace in the world.
@Adie04 (17405)
11 Mar 22
I love the poem. Its a way to convey one's messages.
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@Kandae11 (57231)
11 Mar 22
Thank you. It is a cry from the heart.
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@Adie04 (17405)
13 Mar 22
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