Lost in Septmember

Hangzhou, China
September 6, 2023 7:10am CST
Lingerin' at the maple forest, stream bounces the madrigal. Do you know how much i miss you? finger upon the unsent letter. What's your address now? All the memories are at rest, demon and angel,love is illegal. Have you known how much i miss you? finger into the stream water, bright stars i wanna gem your glow. A bit sorrow,i don't know where to start saying. smilingly tulips fade as my life is gonna be dying. Next September,please don't listen to the rain outside, i fear you maybe hear my loving echoes inside. Question How's your September?Have you any plan on it?
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Valerie J. Routhieaux
@just4him (307405)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
8 Sep
Very nice poem.
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Shizuka
@choijungeun (2540)
• Hangzhou, China
9 Sep
Thanks for dropping by,your words are very warm-hearted
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Valerie J. Routhieaux
@just4him (307405)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
9 Sep
@choijungeun You're welcome.
Anna
@LadyDuck (459545)
• Switzerland
6 Sep
Congratulations for your poem, it's very nice. My September? So far not too bad.
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Shizuka
@choijungeun (2540)
• Hangzhou, China
6 Sep
Glad to hear that.I haven't written poems for a long time.Chores gnaw at me.Tonight i finally get the inspiration.Anyway,Have a good day.
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Anna
@LadyDuck (459545)
• Switzerland
6 Sep
@choijungeun We need to feel relaxed to write poems. I hope you are having a good day.
Danna B.
@db20747 (43434)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
6 Sep
A very nice poem about heart break. September is off to a busy start.
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Shizuka
@choijungeun (2540)
• Hangzhou, China
6 Sep
Thanks for dropping by.You're right,a busy life comes again.
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Diana
@dya80dya (33711)
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25 Oct
I don't make plans. I am not able to accomplish them.
Sharon Elton
@sharonelton (25189)
• Lichfield, England
6 Sep
Very nice poem. That really resonated with me. My September will be the same old same old probably. My friend she might take me out one day but I don't know when. We've been planning it for ages. And I hope to start making some Christmas cards soon.
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Shizuka
@choijungeun (2540)
• Hangzhou, China
6 Sep
I didn't expect you prepare for the Xmas Day so early,wish you have a good time.In September,i'll pluck the fruit to make a living,it's the busiest month to me.I wish i can get it done soon and sell at a good price.
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Sharon Elton
@sharonelton (25189)
• Lichfield, England
6 Sep
@choijungeun Well, I've got a lot of Christmas cards to make and they take some time, especially if I can't get the backing off the double sided tape! Selling fruit to make a living sounds interesting and fun.