Sneak Away - Poem
@MommyOfEli2013 (86636)
Rupert, Idaho
January 27, 2026 3:13pm CST
Hello everyone, how are you all doing?
I thought I would share another old poem of mine. I need to find more than the ones I have in the book I self published. Also, would be nice to write some new ones (if I could still).
A lot of my old poems are dark because I did write them to get through rough times. This is not one of the really dark ones, but not a happy poem either. I'd still love to know what you all think of it.
She’s just a rebel baby
That is what they always say
They can’t describe
The odd and peculiar things she does
So they cover it with labels,
To box in the lies
They’d like to lock her up
and throw away the key
Is that logical?
She’s different,
but not a maniac
No matter how often they throw her those lines,
She’ll never give in
No, not that easily
They’ll have to catch her fast
but they are too oblivious to watch her
sneak away
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@LindaOHio (212510)
• United States
28 Jan
I think @RasmaSandra is right. Would make great lyrics.
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@MommyOfEli2013 (86636)
• Rupert, Idaho
29 Jan
@LindaOHio Maybe someday. I don't know about more words though lol. My brain doesn't seem to have a creative department anymore lol
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@MommyOfEli2013 (86636)
• Rupert, Idaho
28 Jan
I'd have to come up with more words probably for that, and find someone to make the music.
Actually, could probably have AI work on the music!
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@RasmaSandra (93635)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
27 Jan
I love this it would make great lyrics to a rock song for sure,
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@MommyOfEli2013 (86636)
• Rupert, Idaho
27 Jan
Yeah, maybe it could...just need to add more verses, a chorus maybe... I have written lyrics before but lost those.
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@Ineeddentures (15597)
•
27 Jan
I agree
Those were my first thoughts when I read it
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@MommyOfEli2013 (86636)
• Rupert, Idaho
28 Jan
Well I am glad you like it. I realize it might not be the best poem...maybe none of my work was ever that great lol
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@AmbiePam (111679)
• United States
28 Jan
@MommyOfEli2013 You are WAY too hard on yourself. It’s definitely good.
@MommyOfEli2013 (86636)
• Rupert, Idaho
28 Jan
@AmbiePam Well I wrote it back when I was a teenager I believe, so I don't know if it is as good as I thought it was lol
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@just4him (321927)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
28 Jan
It's an interesting poem. It says a lot.
Nobody likes labels.

@MommyOfEli2013 (86636)
• Rupert, Idaho
28 Jan
But good is the question lol. At a point I thought it was since I put it in my poetry book...but reading it back now I don't know.
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@MommyOfEli2013 (86636)
• Rupert, Idaho
28 Jan
Is it? I am not so sure. Should I share more?
Music to go with it? I was never good at making music.
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@MommyOfEli2013 (86636)
• Rupert, Idaho
28 Jan
@Ineeddentures I'll have to see if there are any "good" ones from my book that I haven't shared yet. I shared some a few years ago but then stopped.
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