Breakdown Coming
By RasmaSandra
@RasmaSandra (94142)
Daytona Beach, Florida
February 6, 2026 5:05pm CST
When the world started getting strange some years ago I wrote this poem, I think it fits in very well with today’s situation.
The sky so bright,
sun on the wing,
birds in the trees sing,
then someone down the street,
set off a bomb
and you can feel the breakdown coming.
Day quiet,
nothing going on,
off to do some shopping,
a nut in the parking lot,
shoots a couple
and you just know that,
breakdown is coming.
Suddenly you want,
to run and hide,
nothing seems right anymore,
you never know,
if you will make it back home.
How do you cope,
in a world so full of strife,
no one cares,
no one understands,
anger to the left,
anger to the right,
violence right in your hometown
and you can just feel that,
breakdown coming on.
Where once children ran and played,
some parks now deserted,
mothers keeping children at home.
Schools were great places,
friends all about,
but then in those days,
friends didn’t shoot friends.
Your neighbor smiles at you,
you begin to wonder,
what is behind that smile
and you quickly shut the door.
There is no cure,
you cannot lock yourself in,
best you can do is fill your heart with love,
close your door upon the world,
don’t turn the TV or radio on
and save that breakdown,
for another day.
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3 responses
@RasmaSandra (94142)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
8 Feb
@DianneN and when I wrote it I did not even realize how bad it was going to get
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@LindaOHio (213461)
• United States
7 Feb
Good job. It's all very true. Nothing like our lives were like back in the 60s and 70s.
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@RasmaSandra (94142)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
8 Feb
@LindaOHio wish I could do like in the movie Back to the Future,
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@LindaOHio (213461)
• United States
9 Feb
@RasmaSandra Me too. I'd like to change a lot of things.
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@dgobucks226 (37344)
•
7 Feb
Profound words. Instead of rejoicing in a better world today, it makes you want to take a time machine back to simpler times. 
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@RasmaSandra (94142)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
8 Feb
@dgobucks226 if we only could
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