how many have already written poems till now?..post a few..

@adigaadu (195)
India
January 9, 2007 12:13pm CST
well my dear poets..its not a bad idea to post a few of ur good works..they maybe criticized or corrected or bettered by someone here..they may even be just read and relished by everyone..so post a few of ur works..first me..so here i go.. deep as the rose is red I'll give you my heart;I'll open it up, will u listen to its small still voice? for soft and quiet my heart will speak to the one I'll call my wife. did you hear it dear?did u listen well? do u understand what it said? for deep is the love that it speaks to you, deep as the rose is red. so,take my heart and treat it well and forever in this life, come walk with me,your hand in mine, the one I'll call my wife.
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@greengal (4286)
• United States
31 Jan 07
Hi adigaadu, that's a nice poem you've written. I have a good collection of poems myself since I've been writing for a long time now. Check out the link in my profile, you can read all my poems on the blog I've created. I plan to publish my poems soon, I'm excited about that:)
@greengal (4286)
• United States
31 Jan 07
http://exoticworldofpoetry.blogpost.com
@ashjoe76 (1434)
• India
15 Jan 07
I haven't written poems really. But I like this idea very much. I look forward to seeing more poems here. And I must say that the two poems that are already here are good attempts.
@adigaadu (195)
• India
17 Jan 07
hey ..thanks a lot..the main aim of this discussion is to take the modern poetry to everyone here..if u dint write any then try getting ur friends' poems or start writing one now..hope i'll see a contribution from u..any kinds of poems are welcome..
• United States
15 Jan 07
here's one of my earlier poem ^-^ Autumn Sadness With the changing scenes of beautiful colors turned into the darkest of their forms we soon realize that this time has come again for both of us. Seeing the trees beauty falls As it touches the cold ground Reminds me of you face Underneath the autumn moon. Then in an instant everything turns black And once again I lose you Your face, your image, Everything about you dissappears from my view. You left me that day Taking my soul along with you And didn't even tell me why We were through As tears roll down my cheek The autumn wind wipes it clear.
@adigaadu (195)
• India
17 Jan 07
hey tht is a good poem..interestingly u felt ur self undergoing the grief i guess..well..never the less..good attempt..all the best..post any more if u can..hoping to see more..
@agni610 (127)
• India
9 Jan 07
well,dear friend.i have a poem,but it's mature content.can i post such poem here?send ur response.then i will post it
@adigaadu (195)
• India
10 Jan 07
yeah..u can..a poem is a poem is a poem..so post away..everything is welcome..and will be appreciated if it deserves