how many have already written poems till now?..post a few..
By adigaadu
@adigaadu (195)
India
January 9, 2007 12:13pm CST
well my dear poets..its not a bad idea to post a few of ur good works..they maybe criticized or corrected or bettered by someone here..they may even be just read and relished by everyone..so post a few of ur works..first me..so here i go..
deep as the rose is red
I'll give you my heart;I'll open it up,
will u listen to its small still voice?
for soft and quiet my heart will speak
to the one I'll call my wife.
did you hear it dear?did u listen well?
do u understand what it said?
for deep is the love that it speaks to you,
deep as the rose is red.
so,take my heart and treat it well
and forever in this life,
come walk with me,your hand in mine,
the one I'll call my wife.
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4 responses
@greengal (4286)
• United States
31 Jan 07
Hi adigaadu, that's a nice poem you've written. I have a good collection of poems myself since I've been writing for a long time now. Check out the link in my profile, you can read all my poems on the blog I've created. I plan to publish my poems soon, I'm excited about that:)
@buhbibutterfly (23)
• United States
15 Jan 07
here's one of my earlier poem ^-^
Autumn Sadness
With the changing scenes
of beautiful colors
turned into the darkest
of their forms
we soon realize that this time
has come again for both of us.
Seeing the trees beauty falls
As it touches the cold ground
Reminds me of you face
Underneath the autumn moon.
Then in an instant everything turns black
And once again I lose you
Your face, your image,
Everything about you dissappears from my view.
You left me that day
Taking my soul along with you
And didn't even tell me why
We were through
As tears roll down my cheek
The autumn wind wipes it clear.
