Shayens Abran

@sweetshayens (328)

Joined myLot 5 years ago

Hey mylotters, I have so much questions about anything. So mylot will be the best place to fasilitate my curiosity. You can check my stories on Medium.com :-)

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Discussions (5)

Shayens Abran's Discussions

Metal bed causing leg cramp?

Shayens Abran @sweetshayens (328) 24 Nov 20

When I sleep on metal bed (with mattress), I used to get leg and toe cramp, but after changed to wooden bed, oddly the cramp never come again. I'm not sure if it has correlation, however I have ever read about research that if we...

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3 people

I got Jackfruit!

Shayens Abran @sweetshayens (328) 23 Nov 20

Today I got jackfruit, my favorite fruit. We usually make it as a jam, but now I will eat it raw. It's in the same family with durian, has very sweet taste and fragrance. The texture is slimy and cruchy flesh too. Experts say it...

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5 people

Please Correct my poem 3

Shayens Abran @sweetshayens (328) 3 Nov 20

Hi all, would you please recheck my poem below? If you find some grammar error, please give any suggestion words :-) In the scent of Caledonian The terrace on the hill became our nirvana Witnessed about us, Chimed in porcelain...

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4 people

Please correct my poem 2

Shayens Abran @sweetshayens (328) 3 Nov 20

Hello mylotters, this is my poem about guy who's missing his girl. Would you please check its grammar? If you find any weird sentences, please give some words suggestion :-) You're still the same, As that bright and silky...

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2 people

Help correct my poem 1

Shayens Abran @sweetshayens (328) 3 Nov 20

Hello mylotters, would you please recheck my poem below? If you find grammar errors or weird sentences, please give some words suggestion :-) I'm sprawling on the frozen land, As the red twilight set up on the horizon I'm...

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2 people