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zhuxuan @zhuxuan (12) • China 6 Sep 10

I'll go first. (It's a practice for me as well, any comments are more than welcome. ^^) ___________ The Seine: I want to travel abroad. The Thames: Me too, but there isn't any partners in sight. The Tiber: Then...

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zhuxuan Good idea! Cheers!

7 Sep 10

zhuxuan @zhuxuan (12) • China 5 Sep 10

She stopped at a Mcdonald's drive-through, ordered a McNugged. She was very hungry now. Her partner's perfomance enraged her, so she refused to have a coffee with him after the play as usual. She thought that he didn't have all...

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zhuxuan Sounds cool! I think I'll love the vibration but I'm too far from there. I'm in Beijing.

7 Sep 10

zhuxuan @zhuxuan (12) • China 5 Sep 10

She stopped at a Mcdonald's drive-through, ordered a McNugged. She was very hungry now. Her partner's perfomance enraged her, so she refused to have a coffee with him after the play as usual. She thought that he didn't have all...

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zhuxuan Hi T_diamond, are you sure that it's not a dating site?

6 Sep 10

zhuxuan @zhuxuan (12) • China 5 Sep 10

She stopped at a Mcdonald's drive-through, ordered a McNugged. She was very hungry now. Her partner's perfomance enraged her, so she refused to have a coffee with him after the play as usual. She thought that he didn't have all...

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zhuxuan I do need more practices. Hope to see you here again with your comments.

6 Sep 10

zhuxuan @zhuxuan (12) • China 5 Sep 10

She stopped at a Mcdonald's drive-through, ordered a McNugged. She was very hungry now. Her partner's perfomance enraged her, so she refused to have a coffee with him after the play as usual. She thought that he didn't have all...

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zhuxuan OK. =P You're way ahead of me.

6 Sep 10

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zhuxuan @zhuxuan (12) • China 5 Sep 10

She stopped at a Mcdonald's drive-through, ordered a McNugged. She was very hungry now. Her partner's perfomance enraged her, so she refused to have a coffee with him after the play as usual. She thought that he didn't have all...

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zhuxuan Hi sweetloveforeve Yeah you are right. I'm a bit shamed. = = I wrote it late in the night and felt a little bit tired, so I didn't check it. Sorry~~~~ Thanks for your honest! You are very sweet. The way you think is really nice and warm.

5 Sep 10

zhuxuan @zhuxuan (12) • China 5 Sep 10

She stopped at a Mcdonald's drive-through, ordered a McNugged. She was very hungry now. Her partner's perfomance enraged her, so she refused to have a coffee with him after the play as usual. She thought that he didn't have all...

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zhuxuan Oh! Plz submit your query. Don't think too much about it. There is nothing flawless especially writing, but writing could satisfy us, right? I respect your goal highly and am hoping your story could complete soon. This passage is my practice. I'll write...

5 Sep 10

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zhuxuan @zhuxuan (12) • China 5 Sep 10

She stopped at a Mcdonald's drive-through, ordered a McNugged. She was very hungry now. Her partner's perfomance enraged her, so she refused to have a coffee with him after the play as usual. She thought that he didn't have all...

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zhuxuan I really like your rewrite. Thanks! I'll check the link and I would like to know the website which you mentioned. I'm improving writing techniques because English is not my mother tongue. So I decided to write something everyday! It's not a whole...

5 Sep 10

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