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Gloria Faye Brown Bates @GrannyGee (3517) • Louisburg, North Carolina 10 Jan 17

The beautiful backpack lays on a shelf in my closet. It was a backpack made for an adult, college kid. One can carry their laptop, books ... things with them wherever they go. Before my son died 6 years ago ... he bought this...

grief

loss of only child

grandchildren

everythings going to be alright

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Priya @GrannyGee God bless you!

16 Jan 17

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Priya @The_Bong_Woman (851) 4 Jan 17

The mellowing light The slanting rays The silent sky The cream clouds The tender breeze The soft mist The swaying curtain white Everything tells me In a melodious whisper- Winter is beautiful. -Priyashna. Photo credit-...

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Priya @Magicweaver1 Thank you so much for your compliments! Truth be told, I have never seen a snow fall yet let alone walk deep in snow. But the kind of winter I have been experiencing for the twenty years of my life that I have lived, I find it inexpressibly...

12 Jan 17

Priya @The_Bong_Woman (851) 4 Jan 17

The mellowing light The slanting rays The silent sky The cream clouds The tender breeze The soft mist The swaying curtain white Everything tells me In a melodious whisper- Winter is beautiful. -Priyashna. Photo credit-...

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Priya @redburnet Thank you and white sure has its charm right?

5 Jan 17

Priya @The_Bong_Woman (851) 4 Jan 17

The mellowing light The slanting rays The silent sky The cream clouds The tender breeze The soft mist The swaying curtain white Everything tells me In a melodious whisper- Winter is beautiful. -Priyashna. Photo credit-...

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Priya @arthurchappell I don't blame you for that. In your place, winter must be very harsh. Despite the beauty of the falling snow, the battering cold winds definitely don't add to the comfort I presume. But here in the tropics, the summer is a nightmare and the the...

5 Jan 17

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Priya @The_Bong_Woman (851) 4 Jan 17

The mellowing light The slanting rays The silent sky The cream clouds The tender breeze The soft mist The swaying curtain white Everything tells me In a melodious whisper- Winter is beautiful. -Priyashna. Photo credit-...

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Priya @LadyDuck Thank you so much!

5 Jan 17

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Morley Hunt @Morleyhunt (21737) • Canada 3 Jan 17

Don't we all love our spellcheck? When I am writing on my iPad it often corrects small typos or spelling mistakes without me even being aware of what I have done. Spelling errors bother me! They jump off the page and slap me in...

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Priya @Morleyhunt Agreed!

5 Jan 17

Priya @The_Bong_Woman (851) 4 Jan 17

The mellowing light The slanting rays The silent sky The cream clouds The tender breeze The soft mist The swaying curtain white Everything tells me In a melodious whisper- Winter is beautiful. -Priyashna. Photo credit-...

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Priya @MattMeng Snow... I haven't seen a snowfall yet. It must be very magical isn't it? I wait for the day when I will see it with my own eyes but outside that, the tropical winter (which I have tried to capture in the poem) is definitely beautiful.

5 Jan 17

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Priya @The_Bong_Woman (851) 4 Jan 17

The mellowing light The slanting rays The silent sky The cream clouds The tender breeze The soft mist The swaying curtain white Everything tells me In a melodious whisper- Winter is beautiful. -Priyashna. Photo credit-...

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Priya @Hatley Thank you so much!

5 Jan 17

Priya @The_Bong_Woman (851) 3 Jan 17

You caught me unawares You came when I was totally disarmed. I expected you across a railway platform Or perhaps walking barefoot On a smooth sand beach, Your eyes linked with mine In a moment we are complete, This is what I...

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Priya Thank you so much. I absolutely agree with you when you say fate is something which takes us by surprise; not something we can anticipate. Besides, we all fantasize about finding our other half in a particular way but about that too we can never be certain.

4 Jan 17

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Priya @The_Bong_Woman (851) 3 Jan 17

You caught me unawares You came when I was totally disarmed. I expected you across a railway platform Or perhaps walking barefoot On a smooth sand beach, Your eyes linked with mine In a moment we are complete, This is what I...

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Priya @marlina Thank you so much!

4 Jan 17

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Arthur Chappell @arthurchappell (45002) • Preston, England 2 Jan 17

The weather improved today and it was quite pleasant out when I made my first venture to the shops in days. It was still a bank holiday because of New Year’s Day falling over the weekend, but buses in Preston ran an ordinary...

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Priya How does it work by the way?

4 Jan 17

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Priya @The_Bong_Woman (851) 3 Jan 17

You caught me unawares You came when I was totally disarmed. I expected you across a railway platform Or perhaps walking barefoot On a smooth sand beach, Your eyes linked with mine In a moment we are complete, This is what I...

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Priya @vandana7 LOL okay! I let you off the hook then

4 Jan 17

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Priya @The_Bong_Woman (851) 3 Jan 17

You caught me unawares You came when I was totally disarmed. I expected you across a railway platform Or perhaps walking barefoot On a smooth sand beach, Your eyes linked with mine In a moment we are complete, This is what I...

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Priya @rishav_jaiswal Haha sure go ahead. Thank you by the way for appreciating my poem.

4 Jan 17

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Priya @The_Bong_Woman (851) 3 Jan 17

You caught me unawares You came when I was totally disarmed. I expected you across a railway platform Or perhaps walking barefoot On a smooth sand beach, Your eyes linked with mine In a moment we are complete, This is what I...

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Priya @vandana7 Aw thanks Vanny! But you overstated the case just a little.

3 Jan 17

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Priya @The_Bong_Woman (851) 3 Jan 17

You caught me unawares You came when I was totally disarmed. I expected you across a railway platform Or perhaps walking barefoot On a smooth sand beach, Your eyes linked with mine In a moment we are complete, This is what I...

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Priya @MALUSE No, perhaps a non-indian member will not know if that's a name or just another word in the poem but I did leave a lot of space between the last line of the ending couplet and my name to avoid this very confusion. I used my full name as an undersigned...

3 Jan 17

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