Love Circles

@OURDEW (4812)
United States
June 10, 2007 2:25pm CST
Here is a poem that my mom wrote to my brother and I that I would like to share. Please let me know what you think. Pain and awe flying high Time,please wait that's his first cry ---a mother A skinned knee a torn pink dress Arms reaching up a small voice says ---Mommy Untied shoes tousled hair In grubby hands a flower's there ---for you, Mom Sparkling eyes face so dear The doorbell rings her boyfriend's here ---he's cute, Mom Proud and tall so sure, so right Licenese to drive the furute's bright ---don't worry, Mom A dreamy look excited plans A tear,a smile two golden bands ---I love him, Mom Anxiety grips hope runs wild A tiny sound my child's child ---hello, Grandma
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7 responses
@ElicBxn (60894)
• United States
10 Jun 07
I like that. I'm not much for poetry appreciation, but I really liked that.
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@OURDEW (4812)
• United States
10 Jun 07
Thank you very much. I will tell my mom.
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@pradoz (404)
• India
10 Jun 07
hey this poem is cute.tender and full of affection...my congrats to your mom,ourdew
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@OURDEW (4812)
• United States
10 Jun 07
Thank you very much. I will let her know!
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• Canada
11 Jun 07
Wow! Be sure to tell your mother that her poem was just beautiful. I was almost in tears at the end because my daughter just turned one last week, but I know in time I will experience all of those.
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@OURDEW (4812)
• United States
11 Jun 07
Thank you, I will tell her. My son is now learning to drive, so I'm at that point now. I have read it many times and it still puts me almost to tears.
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• Canada
12 Jun 07
Your welcome, and thanks for telling your mom. She really is talented and has a way with words.
@OURDEW (4812)
• United States
16 Jun 07
She was so happy and pleased, thank you again.
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@AmbiePam (50391)
• United States
10 Jun 07
I'm not a crier, but by the end of the poem I almost teared up. Please tell your mother she has a tremendous talent that obviously comes from a generous and loving heart.
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@OURDEW (4812)
• United States
10 Jun 07
Your are so kind, thank you. I will let my mom know what you said. My mom does have a very loving heart.
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@AmbiePam (50391)
• United States
19 Jun 07
Thank you for the best response as well as the poem. : )
@coolmailraj (2461)
• India
16 Jun 07
Hi. Really really really very nice. It is really sweet, specilly the last one when the mom no longer is only a mom but a grandma. In the whole day today, this is the one small time I have enjoyed something, thank you.
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@OURDEW (4812)
• United States
16 Jun 07
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I hope your day gets better.
@raydene (9874)
• United States
12 Jun 07
That is very sweet. You must be very proud to have such a talented mom. Please tell her how special it is. Hugs
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@OURDEW (4812)
• United States
12 Jun 07
Thank you so much, I will tell her.
@derek_a (10902)
11 Jun 07
That's a very good poem of your mums. About her life all in a short poem and it says it all :-)
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@OURDEW (4812)
• United States
11 Jun 07
Thank you very much!
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