A beautiful poem on life... Talk with the life.

July 6, 2007 6:55pm CST
Just want to share a beautiful poem from one my friend. Just have a look and tell me do you have such type of talk with yourself. Title: Let us promise to make life as lustrous as ever! By Praveen M. Joshi (www.esnips.com/user/praveenmjoshi) My dear Life, I have lived you all through; We lived you all through those bygone days and nights! Nevertheless, forgive us, for we had not cared awhile We cared not to retain your shine as lustrous as ever! As we lived, engulfed in a perennial struggle, we dared; Dared to do this and then that, but cared not to measure how we fared! We struggled between the bouts of actions and inactions; However, could not retain our union that faltered into factions! In the field of life we stand, facing the notions of negligence; Though careful and attentive to watch, you live by; Nevertheless, we lose ourselves to carelessness and inactions; Neglecting the righteousness for we are in a hurry! Hey Life, don’t lose heart nor do will we lose you by; Help us explore and discover what gives us our inner drive to live you! Help us to know who we are, and why do you want us here! Moreover, be with us for in due course we will retain your shine as lustrous as ever!
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@beauty_ph (2751)
• Philippines
8 Jul 07
Thank you for sharing a wonderful poem here. I think I love poem but I just have a hard time writing one. LOL. I often do not talk to myself that way. Most of the time I talk to God in prayers. Not to myself. LOL. God bless!
• India
8 Jul 07
I think speaking to god is very close to speaking you ourselves. We are part of that eternal core system called god.
@ctrymuziklvr (11059)
• United States
8 Jul 07
Thank You - Awesome poem!
Awesome poem. I copied it and am going to share it with my daughters. I know they will appreciate it. Thanks for posting it.
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