Wjy should I?

@sreevasu (2717)
India
September 2, 2007 6:33am CST
Why should I need my eyes If you are there to hold my hands? You're with me always To show me to my heart what's around.
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klaudyou
@klaudyou (501)
•
16 Apr 08
If "she" can substitute your eyes, "she" can substitute your visible world..."she" leaves only the feeling...the feeling for "her"...what a thief!
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sreevasu
@sreevasu (2717)
• India
20 Apr 08
I think you read it wrongly.. It's not a matter of substitution... I never meant it materially.
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Breath
@Breath (1297)
• United States
16 Apr 08
Your words are beautiful...Yet so sad in a haunting whisper...
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sreevasu
@sreevasu (2717)
• India
20 Apr 08
But it can be turned to a pleasant one, see: Why I need a Sunrise when you are near me Why I need a honey-full Spring when you live in my heart
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Breath
@Breath (1297)
• United States
22 Apr 08
The spring blooms....Smell the sweetness...Feel the warmth...
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sreevasu
@sreevasu (2717)
• India
24 Apr 08
Yes now I understand... it is you.. and only you.. It was this whisper haunted my all these days.
mimpi
@mimpi1911 (25464)
• India
23 Apr 08
So beautiful, Sreevasu. You have real way with words. Loved it, as I always do.
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sreevasu
@sreevasu (2717)
• India
24 Apr 08
It is really glad to know that someone really understands what you say. And you always did it with me. I am grateful to you dear Mimpi.
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mimpi
@mimpi1911 (25464)
• India
24 Apr 08
I am glad that we understand each other and friendship is such a nice thing on earth!
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Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
23 Apr 08
that is a rather nice little poem.keep up the good work.
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sreevasu
@sreevasu (2717)
• India
24 Apr 08
Thank you Hatley..
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naseeha
@naseeha (1382)
• India
29 May 08
thats such a short and sweet poem loved it
sreevasu
@sreevasu (2717)
• India
29 May 08
Thank you Naseeha for appreciating it..