May 31, 2008 11:22am CST
I spend hours Watching you sit by the wondow As you listen to the rain The warm hold of your beauty I bask in the afterglow You have a way about you that is cryptic The serene voice of a thousand oceans The soul of 100 lifetimes Eyes that behold eternity In love I am basking in your afterglow Such a hold you have on my heart With elegance you fill my days with joy You are my reason, my salvation A gift from Heaven above I bask in your afterglow
• United States
6 Jun 08
This is beautiful piece. You capture the inne most beauty of the person you are speaking about. As I read this piece I can almost imagine this beautiful person, someone so precious and priceless..like a daydream.. Keep writing!