one of my songs, im just putting it here coz i dont know where to put it, i use
July 15, 2008 2:54pm CST
write songs before, this one of the oldest and one of the few english songs ive written, since i dont know the language that well i write mostly in my native tongue, it is entitled old friend, here it is i gave my heart away to know your joy and to know your pain ive broken down my walls to welcome your morning light and your rain you put your heart in my hands so i'd be gentle so i would understand old friend may my dawns begin with you and my nights a cradle for two let me breath you in let me live you let me know i gave my life away yet ive never been so free and all the things that i see i see through you i knew you youve let me
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19 Aug 08
Thanks for the best response. I don't think any writing is crap, just some need to be revised a bit (some more than other)..and some are just what we need to write to reach the words that we are meant to find. Keep writing and you will be surprised at what will transform before your eyes.