i love you this much!!

@austere (2816)
Philippines
August 15, 2008 4:18pm CST
i made this poem for my boyfriend on his birthday.. and he really loved it.. i just want to share it for you to read.. you can also post your own poems here.. [i]I love you and i always will i'm ready to give you my all, my heart, my soul, and whatever is left of me i love you because you love me for who i am because you are you because you care because you showed me how beautiful life is and for so many more reasons, some i cannot fathom With you i feel comfortable, i feel loved, i feel free and in your arms is where i can be me being with you puts in a state of euphoria, i do not want to leave extreme happiness is all am dealing with I thank you for this feeling i thank you because you care i thank you for so many reasons... for everything you have done to me and for me.. and i will do everything to show you am grateful and that i also care, i cannot imagine life without you honey i'll be in despair Let's make this forever the road is not easy, but we'll get through am looking forward for a tomorrow with you ..and i know you are too..:) so promise me you'll hold on and stay true... i love you[/i]
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5 responses
@angelia286 (2029)
• Singapore
16 Aug 08
Thanks for sharing the poem you had written for your boyfriend to us! That is really so sweet of you, and you must have love your boyfriend a lot! That is poem that describes your feelings beautifully. You really have a flair for words.
@austere (2816)
• Philippines
16 Aug 08
thank you.. yes i love him very much.. more than word can say in fact!
• Philippines
16 Aug 08
thats nice girl, i realy love the way you treat your boyfriend instead of giving him something found in the mall , you gave him a thing that he could treasure forever.
@austere (2816)
• Philippines
16 Aug 08
thank you.. i love him so much, and i wish i could do and give more...even if i have to make poems every day for of my life for me.. i really dont mind!
@roshand8 (1481)
• Sri Lanka
16 Aug 08
oh that's beautiful... No wonder he liked it like that Stay with the spirit and cheers..
@austere (2816)
• Philippines
16 Aug 08
thank you so much.. and thank you for dropping by and responding to my discussion too..
• China
16 Aug 08
From this love poem,I can see how much you love your boyfriend.I'm sure that he must have been the happiest man in the world while reading it.Love always makes a great number of couples strong enough to encounter any difficulty they meet in life.So I'd like to offer both of you the famous proverb:All shall be well,Jack shall have Jill.
@austere (2816)
• Philippines
16 Aug 08
i really do love him..like so much! you are definitely right about that.. when i gave him the poem, he thanked me so much and he said that it was the best gift that he received on his birthday! i like your proverb.. it's like everything ends well and happy!!!
@alkurishy (2069)
• Iraq
15 Aug 08
I see that the words you have in you poem is full of sensations and love feelings, I think he is lucky to have some one love him like this, keep writing like this poems, you have a good feelings and have a good choices for the words. Have a nice day and happy posting.
@austere (2816)
• Philippines
16 Aug 08
thank you.. it's who's lucky to have him.. no, i think, we're both lucky and happy to have each other. i'm glad you like the poem. it feels good to hear that you like the poem, that you appreciate it. you too happy posting and that's for dropping by!