Correct English

India
November 17, 2006 1:40am CST
Application of leave: "My wife is suffering from sickness and as I am her only husband at home I may be granted leave" Is it Correct? Find fault in the above sentence. I will rate you.
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12 responses
@neon2000 (2756)
• Philippines
17 Nov 06
Try this: Dear sir, I would like to take a leave of absence because my wife is very sick. I am the only one who can take care of her. Hope you can grant me a leave. Thanks and regards. That's completo recados! your leave will be granted. goodluck!
• India
17 Nov 06
Yes u r correct. The husband wants to convey that he is only the person available in the house who can take care of her.
• India
9 Dec 06
Yeah! it's fun... hahahahahihihihhiii
@haranv (571)
• India
25 Nov 06
this guy is rite..the word "im the only husband" lol kinda funny...
@cuddiluk (1523)
• Philippines
17 Nov 06
Oic. Dear Sir: My wife is suffering from sickness. As her husband, I need to take care of her. Looking forward to grant my Leave of Absence. Truly yours, Prakas
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• India
17 Nov 06
Yes, u r correct. Thanks for response
• India
10 Dec 06
i want to but you gave best responce so i am not willing
• India
11 Dec 06
No problem! better next time. My tip is struck early.
@Signal20 (2281)
• United States
17 Nov 06
Well, technically it should be broken up/rewritten. It's a run on sentence-a really bad run on sentence lol. This is how I would write it: My wife is suffering from a sickness. As I am her only husband, I request to be granted a leave. Now, if it has to stay like that: My wife is suffering from sickness, and as I am her only husband at the home, I may be granted leave.
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• India
17 Nov 06
Please note the point "I'm her only husband". What does that mean? ha..ha.. ha..
@cuddiluk (1523)
• Philippines
17 Nov 06
My wife is suffering from sickness. As husband at home, my leave must be granted.
• India
18 Nov 06
Thanks for reply.
@pedumfio (667)
• Canada
25 Nov 06
or give them the sad puppy face - .
Try .. Due to the fat that my wife is extremely ill and I am the only one who can take care of her, may I be granted a leave of absence?
• India
25 Nov 06
Yes, u r correct fat.
@pedumfio (667)
• Canada
25 Nov 06
i meant fact not fat on that first part
@ashraf7 (851)
• India
18 Nov 06
"my wife is suffering from sickness, as a husband i want to b with her,so i want you to grant a leave,"
• India
25 Nov 06
Thank you very much for your reply.
• United States
25 Nov 06
My question is ...does this mean she has more than one husband and they live outside her home? "as I am her only husband at home"
• India
25 Nov 06
She is not having more than one husband. But, the leave letter gives that meaning. That's the fault in the letter. Thanks for reply.
@sudha_166 (183)
• India
17 Nov 06
English girl - Girl
My wife is not keeping well and I am the only person with her at home to take care. So, I Kindly request you to grant me leave for one day. If I need to use your same meaning to give a leave letter, I hope this is enough. Comments please...
• India
18 Nov 06
Thanks for reply.
• United States
25 Nov 06
I'm sick and tired of my wife.. she nags a lot so irritating, could i leave her? lol
• India
25 Nov 06
hahahahah.............
@chd0272 (10)
• India
9 Dec 06
My wife is unwell and because of being the only person at home to take care of her, request you to grant me leave.
• India
9 Dec 06
Yes, u r correct. Thanks for reply.
@vinod18 (172)
• India
20 Dec 06
her only husband..... hahahahaha..... how many husbands she got..... hahahahahaha